WEEK 5 TEXT: KAOS (1-0) Vs Red Tha Baron (3-1)

[Shoalin]

TIMES ARE PST (Los angeles Local Time)
Check In Due: Sunday, 11th March 11:59 AM
Verses Due: Tuesday, March 13th, 11:59 PM

ANYONE CAN VOTE ON THIS BATTLE

(If your opponent checks in you must post some sort of verse for a win, if he doesn’t check in, then you win by default.)

Number of bars: Decided by Battlers


Ect. Rules:
No Biting,ghost writting,or recylcing

3-0 KO, 4-1 TKO, Or First To 5 Wins.
No Hate/Dick Riding/Unexplained Votes.

crew votes are only allowed if both battlers agree on it.

Voting Rules:

1) Catogories,only with full explinations
Punches:
Personals:
Multies:
Metas:
Flow:
Wordplay:
Creativity:
Nameplay:
Complexity:
Consistency:
Vocab:

or

2)Bar by bar breakdowns

Misc:

Title battles will be based on record, attendance, and overall skill. Do not ask for a title shot.

[Red Tha Baron]

..3 bars sound good?

[kaos]

sure...

[Red Tha Baron]

http://img137.imageshack.us/img137/1596/whutuptu0.jpg

Only `'Sharp Lines From ya Skull`' Is The Scar Ya Got In Pimpin Fight That Was Over Ya Mums Tw.at
My Lines `'Run Over Ya Head`'...Cos You Already Got an Olympic Size Track On Ya Fu.kin Dumb Hat

Ya Aint `'Interesting`'...Thats Why Ya Got a Baggy Flow To Ya Eyes
Like Teen Makeouts In Tornadoes, Have Ya `'Carcass In a Ditch`'. Pack Heat Tho, So You'll Fry
This Hoe Shook, Put 'metal 2 ya spine' call it a 'Notebook'. You'll `'Die A Real Exposed Death`' Like Wot Sad Emo Likes To Write

in ta resting
car kiss in a ditch
diary'll expose death

Send `'Pair A Shooters`' To ya Crib Like Furture FedEx When Da Roads Get Broke Up
DOPE?`..Ay Kaos Deal?...NO Bruh. But I'll Show Ya How To "Turn Flips" & Let Da Lead Soak Ya

^^^
*ay kaos deal BACKWORDS(FLIPPED) IS lead soak ya*


..eh, keystyled save for the concepts

[kaos]

I laugh at the size of the fist yur making , leave a pair of scissors placed-in ya sister's apron
then put the 'Peace to the Back of ya Head' without 'Pulling a Prank when a Pictures Taken' !
punches disfigure satan
and I'ma push ya mandibles thru ya teeth , watch a cannibal chew his feet
votes wont require a break down -
cuz you'll only get a 'Cat A Gory' if you 'Lose a Case of Animal Cruelty' !
collecting annual duel fees , kaos wreck the tweeters of expensive speakers
and you can even check the features -
cuz you lack the respect of readers
and you 'GOT OFF to a Shaky Start' like 'Erections From an Epileptic Seizure' !

[Anesthetic]

Red Tha Baron:
Only `'Sharp Lines From ya Skull`' Is The Scar Ya Got In Pimpin Fight That Was Over Ya Mums Tw.at
My Lines `'Run Over Ya Head`'...Cos You Already Got an Olympic Size Track On Ya Fu.kin Dumb Hat

Twat and hat don't rhyme, but it might just be me. Pretty solid opener, I guess, could've been WAY better. Funny about the hat though.

Ya Aint `'Interesting`'...Thats Why Ya Got a Baggy Flow To Ya Eyes
Like Teen Makeouts In Tornadoes, Have Ya `'Carcass In a Ditch`'. Pack Heat Tho, So You'll Fry
This Hoe Shook, Put 'metal 2 ya spine' call it a 'Notebook'. You'll `'Die A Real Exposed Death`' Like Wot Sad Emo Likes To Write
Nice wordplay, but this was HELLA stretched. It may as well have been two barz.

Send `'Pair A Shooters`' To ya Crib Like Furture FedEx When Da Roads Get Broke Up
DOPE?`..Ay Kaos Deal?...NO Bruh. But I'll Show Ya How To "Turn Flips" & Let Da Lead Soak Ya
Like the backwardz name flip, it's somethin' different. And it took me a second to get the Pair A Shooters, future Fed Ex thing, but it was, and I quote, DA BOMB.

Kaos:
I laugh at the size of the fist yur making , leave a pair of scissors placed-in ya sister's apron
then put the 'Peace to the Back of ya Head' without 'Pulling a Prank when a Pictures Taken' !
Lol, you'd think that was played, but it seemed fresh to me. Nice opener. :silly:

punches disfigure satan
and I'ma push ya mandibles thru ya teeth , watch a cannibal chew his feet
votes wont require a break down -
cuz you'll only get a 'Cat A Gory' if you 'Lose a Case of Animal Cruelty' !
First line was filler to the fullest, but the second line's WP was crisp. Nice.

collecting annual duel fees , kaos wreck the tweeters of expensive speakers
and you can even check the features -
cuz you lack the respect of readers
and you 'GOT OFF to a Shaky Start' like 'Erections From an Epileptic Seizure' !
LoLoLoLoL!! Nice closer.

Punches: Kaos
Personals: Red Tha Baron, for the pik.
Multies: Tie.
Metas: Tie.
Flow: Kaos
Wordplay: Tie.
Creativity: Red
Nameplay: Kaos
Complexity: Red
Consistency: Red. All of Kaos' first linez were filler, to me.
Vocab: Tie.

O/A Vote: Tie

[kaos]

uppin

[Multi]

i vote for kaos

[DiMe™]

Prityt Nice Battle, Good Concepts And Some Hard Punches....


Flow - Kaos
Multies - Kaos [Just Cleaner In My Opinion]
Personals - Red The Baron
Punches - Kaos
Wordplay - Red The Baron [2nd bar was crazy, unfortunatly you had to stretch the bar to fit it in]
Creativity - Red The Baron
Nameplay - TIE
Complexity - Red The Baron
Consistency - Red The Baron [Like annie said Kaos used his first line to set up his heavy punches]
Vocab - Kaos

Overall Vote = Red The Baron

Red The Baron - 5 Cats
Kaos - 4 Cats


Just Edged This One....

So Is That 2-1?

I'm assuming you wont count multi's vote....

[KasuaL]

Punches: kaos
Personals: Red Tha Baron
Multies: kaos
Metas: Red Tha Baron
Flow: kaos
Wordplay: Red Tha Baron
Creativity: Red Tha Baron
Nameplay: ..ehh, Tie?
Complexity: Red Tha Baron
Consistency: Red Tha Baron
Vocab: kaos

Overall: Red Tha Baron

Favorite Lines:

Red Tha Baron
Only `'Sharp Lines From ya Skull`' Is The Scar Ya Got In Pimpin Fight That Was Over Ya Mums Tw.at
My Lines `'Run Over Ya Head`'...Cos You Already Got an Olympic Size Track On Ya Fu.kin Dumb Hat

kaos
collecting annual duel fees, kaos wreck the tweeters of expensive speakers
and you can even check the features, cuz you lack the respect of readers
and you 'GOT OFF to a Shaky Start' like 'Erections From an Epileptic Seizure'

3-0 KO for Red Tha Baron

[KasuaL]

3-1 to Red Tha Baron

Sorry, my mistake. I counted the votes wrong.

[The Chozen One 13]

Punches: kaos
Personals: Red Tha Baron
Multies: tie
Metas: Red Tha Baron
Flow: kaos
Wordplay: red
Creativity: Red Tha Baron
Nameplay:Tie?
Complexity: Red Tha Baron
Consistency: Red Tha Baron
Vocab: kaos

o/a:red