SiNiS(5) Vs Shoalin(3) FiNiTo

[Shoalin]

10 barz.... Due 3 Dayz.... House Rulez....






MOTHERFUCKING CHECK! :roll:

[SiNiS]

your a Novice I Promise I'm not Pompous just Honest!

TARGET INDENTIFIED

Wish me Coyer? SiN will Make a Foyer of this Toyer just for my Entrance as Board Destroyer!
In Fact when Raps Fire like Employers it Leaves Boy Here wit 'Men Tell-in Jury's' like a Lawyer
(mental injury)

O my 'Paws-Claw-n'-Serve-Face' like Animal Prints! Try to Run with me Garanteed to Fall Off like Sandles in Sprints
Diss-Man-Telling Scripts..? Bars so Hott Can't be Handled wit Mitts, just admit like a Pimp I Tramp-Pulled this Bitch!
(dismantel, tampled)

Wreck 'S' like Doomsday cuz Duke stays Wack-n'-His Rebuttles are Soft Back like Mailed Brochures
Flow Hurts Feelingz like Nerve Damage n' Shoalin can Take 'Off-Fin's' like Insulted Whale Poachers
(offence)

TARGET ON LOCK

Dont Assume I'll get Used as a Stepping Stone to Gaining Some Fame
Cuz Check it Yo! I Clock Foes n' Easily Drop DOE like I'm Makin it Rain!

Sick of this Gay! He cant Spit Flame like Broke Lighterz, plus I Flow Tighter leaving Sentences Blazed
See its Slow Learning but i'll leave his Skull Burning without useing 'Ghost Writers' like Nicholas Cage
(Ghost Ryder)

Fuck Writtens like Pen Rapist, yes Sinz Greatest and you Cant See Me, Get Lasic!
Dam your Spits Basic! thats why your Battle 'Post Get Handled' like Fence Makers

FIRE WHEN READY

Shoalin's Mixed Up just like Kool-Aid, for Thinkin I'm not Sharper then Dual-Blades Used in Cruel-Ways
I Need 'Pic's of Sled Ridez' just to 'See this Fool-Sleigh' cuz he wouldn't be a Class Act in School-Playz
(sleigh/slay)

Check the Location, he works with his Mom! Dont know the Feeling but it must Suck when theres Nobody Knowing Ya
HUH? you Couldn't Deliver working a Maternity Ward cuz you only got 'Miner Talents' like 'Dealing with Claustrophobia'
(minor talents)
*testing sandpaper condoms on hookers with VD*

I'm a Schooler, One Ruler Dude cant Measure up Too! Son I'm over you like High Noon
Yes Ya Never Fresh like Fried Food so I am abliged to 'Rain Blows Down' like Typhoons!

I've got Alot of Winz and 'Vary Fuel's' like Hybrids! Drive Test? it's Hard to Battle SiN with out Loosin your Soul!
So Teamin with Gordon ya still Wouldnt have Ben-on-Point cuz your Style is Whore-Rid like Prositution Control!
(Very few L's / Ben Gordon / Horrid )

TARGET NUETRILIZED

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[Shoalin]

And So SiN Was Wiped And Banished From The Land.......

Shoa Fists Hunt and Find-Tha-Dead,Oh n SiNz BiTes! We All See He "Chow N Lie" Like Communist China-men
Crush His Sternum Only Usin The Lighter-Lead But Still His "Kin See Son BURN!" Like Sexologists Goin Brighter-Red!

You Aint Shit, Now I Progress To Leave Ya Hype-Drained I Land "Drops On SiN's Head" so Its a Definate It Might-Rain
u Cant Stay "Stay Above S Level" In Thiz Fight-Mayne Coz When I Say Sin Drop Like Tha First Flight Aint Jus Talkin he WRITES-PLAIN!

SiN's On The Drying Rack, Gotta Face That He Washed~Up I Thrown Him Down an I Aint Even Be gin-The-Power
Shoa Drops Like Satan, So I Guess Im Ya Boss~Chump N The Only Time SiN "Drop S" Would Be In-The-Shower!

He Got Hired Help, So He Figured He Wanna Fight~now But Ima Jaw Crusher Who Leave Abrasions Real Deep-son
Destroy SiNis, I Jab An Leave Hiz I's~Gouged Once We Relise "SNS Aint Kill Shit!" With out The mention of Cheap-Gunz

Every Launch Hitz n Stay-Round-You,Then Sat Him Down N Said "You Jus Suck, See man" n i Aint Talkin Gay-Mouthfuls
Ya Spitz All Whack An Ya Plays-Doubtful The Only Time "SiN (www.sin.org.au) Gets Checked Out" Iz Fo Info On Aidz-Councils


SiN Acts Like Balls, Its Fair To say You Just Keep Hanging To The Cock-Fam an Respected You Not-Man
Watch sin Try Run N Get Popped-Damn! Coz "Voters Would Never SAY OH SIN!" Like Silent Ballots Of The Rock Band!!!!!!!!


Im Like Jesus... Eradicate SiN? My Task-is-Clear Him Stoppin me? NO! the Only "Ring He Smash In" iz When a Ass-Is-Near
Blend Vetz To Wall Paint Shoa Blast-This-Kweer N As Far As Predicatable Verses Go, i Could Foresee Sin's Like The Average-Year!


Fists Got A Lust To Shred His Sections, Straight Up Eat-His-Ribs SiN It Aint Possible For You to De Feat-This-Shit
No Fucking Mercy When I Beat-This-Kid Itz Simple, My Barz Be The Two Tree's When I "Tear SiNiS In Half" Like Thesus-Did


Commin At me Thinkin You Can Box-n-shit Well Watch Me Treat SiN Like "Coverin Midrifts" n Top-This-Bitch
Best Belive he Be Stationery When I Pop-The-Clipz, The Only Time He Reach The "Peak Of G.A.M.E" Was Riding Toxn's-Dick!

I out Match And Destroy Every Punch That You Try-An-Bring I Leave Blisters That Formulate To a Dyin-Sting
So Afterwards Itz Just My Praise You Try-n-Sing Cause i "Annihalate Sin Bars" Like Assasinating The Lion-King!



EXPLANATIONS
Bar1: [Chou N Lai= Chinese Commy Leader in Cold War, Kinsey Sunburn= Alfred Kinsey Famous sexologist]
Bar2: [Sea Level... First Flight was Wright Bro's an It dropped on the ground after a few seconds... jus like sinis is about to ]
Bar3: -
Bar4:[Deepson Jawcrusher (www.deepsonindia.com/)... SiNiS wit out I's is SNS= Saturday Night Special]
Bar5: Click SIN for info.
Bar6:[http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Saosin goodnight :) ]
Bar7:[1st line is simple.... second= Four seasons, Foresee sins.]
Bar8:[sinis was killed by thesus (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Siris_%28mythology%29)
Bar9:[SiN jump out of PLL to join GAME... Toxn's dickride...:)]
Bar10: Simbar, Sinbar.

[SiNiS]

*edits out SiNiS' Ridiculously Stupid Post*


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Why did you edit my post in a battle against you.. not chill MOD!
what i said in my original post is why did you miss your own deadline..?
just because you edited your Verse six times Doesn't mean its ok to abuse your power as mod and edit my post for no reason!
dont edit my post ever again! your stepping outta line youngin!

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[Nemesis14]

tight as hell battle close as hell


idk if you want bar by bar break downs, but yo its 1 in the morning so fuck that shit



Punches: Shoalin, dude came with em harder, and was more consistent
Personals: Tie, you both had em
Wordplay: Sin, i'm not really great at spotting wordplay so idk if shoa had any i saw a couple, but sin to me had more
Vocab: Tie
Complexity:tie. You both really came nicely although shoa could have took this prolly
Enjoyment: Shoalin, its a battle, punchlines win you the battle, and shoa had em

O/A: Shoalin

[SiNiS]

Funny Nemesis would be the first to Vote.. he's only been in all my threads talkin shit!


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[Cool c]

i GOT To read this one more time but i will vote to day

[Red Tha Baron]

Wish me Coyer? SiN will Make a Foyer of this Toyer just for my Entrance as Board Destroyer!
In Fact when Raps Fire like Employers it Leaves Boy Here wit 'Men Tell-in Jury's' like a Lawyer
(mental injury)
nice ass wordplay..but it aint personal...good flow, but therre was really only one punchline, and the new thing is to have something in ya first line..

O my 'Paws-Claw-n'-Serve-Face' like Animal Prints! Try to Run with me Garanteed to Fall Off like Sandles in Sprints
Diss-Man-Telling Scripts..? Bars so Hott Can't be Handled wit Mitts, just admit like a Pimp I Tramp-Pulled this Bitch!
(dismantel, tampled)
first better than the last one, got some actual wieght to its punches...you you should edit your verse so people understand its trampled and tramp pulled...its says tampled and idiots herre may not get it...but yea, this was a nice bar with some good wordplay..overall a nice bar

Wreck 'S' like Doomsday cuz Duke stays Wack-n'-His Rebuttles are Soft Back like Mailed Brochures
Flow Hurts Feelingz like Nerve Damage n' Shoalin can Take 'Off-Fin's' like Insulted Whale Poachers
(offence)
decent flow, but you should up ya multie game IMO...i was feelin the mail brochures line...and the last line had simple wordplay but it was pretty hard hitting...simplicity is nice...good shit

Dont Assume I'll get Used as a Stepping Stone to Gaining Some Fame
Cuz Check it Yo! I Clock Foes n' Easily Drop DOE like I'm Makin it Rain!
ehh? thats alittle too simple...come on, this is filler...

Sick of this Gay! He cant Spit Flame like Broke Lighterz, plus I Flow Tighter leaving Sentences Blazed
See its Slow Learning but i'll leave his Skull Burning without useing 'Ghost Writers' like Nicholas Cage
(Ghost Ryder)
lol, i was feelin this flip...pretty funny...better flow, actually had a inner multie in that first line...nice

Fuck Writtens like Pen Rapist, yes Sinz Greatest and you Cant See Me, Get Lasic!
Dam your Spits Basic! thats why your Battle 'Post Get Handled' like Fence Makers
finally some f.u.c.k.ing multies...final punchline is nice, hard hitting but still simple..

Shoalin's Mixed Up just like Kool-Aid, for Thinkin I'm not Sharper then Dual-Blades Used in Cruel-Ways
I Need 'Pic's of Sled Ridez' just to 'See this Fool-Sleigh' cuz he wouldn't be a Class Act in School-Playz
(sleigh/slay)
nice flow and multies...but this is played, sorry..

Check the Location, he works with his Mom! Dont know the Feeling but it must Suck when theres Nobody Knowing Ya
HUH? you Couldn't Deliver working a Maternity Ward cuz you only got 'Miner Talents' like 'Dealing with Claustrophobia'
(minor talents)
*testing sandpaper condoms on hookers with VD*
lol, i never heard that before...funny shit, and gettin jus alittle personal with his location...nice bar, was feelin that last punchline..

I'm a Schooler, One Ruler Dude cant Measure up Too! Son I'm over you like High Noon
Yes Ya Never Fresh like Fried Food so I am abliged to 'Rain Blows Down' like Typhoons!
im feelin the metas herre....lol, nice punch too...im feelin this style..good bar...but not personal? hmm....

I've got Alot of Winz and 'Vary Fuel's' like Hybrids! Drive Test? it's Hard to Battle SiN with out Loosin your Soul!
So Teamin with Gordon ya still Wouldnt have Ben-on-Point cuz your Style is Whore-Rid like Prositution Control!
(Very few L's / Ben Gordon / Horrid )
see, this type of shit, with wordplay everywherre is how all the bars shoulda been...this wqas dope as a closer, nice wordplay..a good finsiher IMO.

...................................;

Shoa Fists Hunt and Find-Tha-Dead,Oh n SiNz BiTes! We All See He "Chow N Lie" Like Communist China-men
Crush His Sternum Only Usin The Lighter-Lead But Still His "Kin See Son BURN!" Like Sexologists Goin Brighter-Red!
cho en lai aint pronounced "chow n lie" dude, herres proof...http://www.britannica.com/dictionary?va=Chou+En-lai&query=Chou+En-lai
...anyway nice multies...last wordplay was dope...

You Aint Shit, Now I Progress To Leave Ya Hype-Drained I Land "Drops On SiN's Head" so Its a Definate It Might-Rain
u Cant Stay "Stay Above S Level" In Thiz Fight-Mayne Coz When I Say Sin Drop Like Tha First Flight Aint Jus Talkin he WRITES-PLAIN!
nice shit herre..wasnt feelin first line, but the second made up for that...dope

SiN's On The Drying Rack, Gotta Face That He Washed~Up I Thrown Him Down an I Aint Even Be gin-The-Power
Shoa Drops Like Satan, So I Guess Im Ya Boss~Chump N The Only Time SiN "Drop S" Would Be In-The-Shower!
ayo, this "intial" "nameplays" gotta stop, they getin played out forreal unless you had more to them...

He Got Hired Help, So He Figured He Wanna Fight~now But Ima Jaw Crusher Who Leave Abrasions Real Deep-son
Destroy SiNis, I Jab An Leave Hiz I's~Gouged Once We Relise "SNS Aint Kill Shit!" With out The mention of Cheap-Gunz
first line is dope...i was not feelin the last punch tho, coulda been worded way better IMO

Every Launch Hitz n Stay-Round-You,Then Sat Him Down N Said "You Jus Suck, See man" n i Aint Talkin Gay-Mouthfuls
Ya Spitz All Whack An Ya Plays-Doubtful The Only Time "SiN Gets Checked Out" Iz Fo Info On Aidz-Councils
gay wordplay is played out...BOO!!!!....second is nice...but who seriously know about south african companies that help sex workers not get HIV...it connects, but iono...its like you google shit til you find somthing, but no1 knows it til they click on that link...im gettin tired of this link shit...but still..nah, played first line, and dumb second line...

SiN Acts Like Balls, Its Fair To say You Just Keep Hanging To The Cock-Fam an Respected You Not-Man
Watch sin Try Run N Get Popped-Damn! Coz "Voters Would Never SAY OH SIN!" Like Silent Ballots Of The Rock Band!!!!!!!!
first line is played...this is better, feelin this.,..cuz its an american band that aint some out therre shit...good bar except for the first line..

Im Like Jesus... Eradicate SiN? My Task-is-Clear Him Stoppin me? NO! the Only "Ring He Smash In" iz When a Ass-Is-Near
Blend Vetz To Wall Paint Shoa Blast-This-Kweer N As Far As Predicatable Verses Go, i Could Foresee Sin's Like The Average-Year!
first line i wasnt feelin...second line was fuckin dope tho...good punchline and wordplay therre..

Fists Got A Lust To Shred His Sections, Straight Up Eat-His-Ribs SiN It Aint Possible For You to De Feat-This-Shit
No Fucking Mercy When I Beat-This-Kid Itz Simple, My Barz Be The Two Tree's When I "Tear SiNiS In Half" Like Thesus-Did
no....this is too simple..thats like him sayin "tear shoalin in half" like *famous ninja* did....not feelin this at all

Commin At me Thinkin You Can Box-n-shit Well Watch Me Treat SiN Like "Coverin Midrifts" n Top-This-Bitch
Best Belive he Be Stationery When I Pop-The-Clipz, The Only Time He Reach The "Peak Of G.A.M.E" Was Riding Toxn's-Dick!
ive seriously heard this type of punches too often, and the GAME punches ive heard before...i remember when some of us RD went to IHH, someone used this punch...wasnt the same tho...but its kinda a weak wordplay IMO...

I out Match And Destroy Every Punch That You Try-An-Bring I Leave Blisters That Formulate To a Dyin-Sting
So Afterwards Itz Just My Praise You Try-n-Sing Cause i "Annihalate Sin Bars" Like Assasinating The Lion-King!
forced?...oh wait you silly aussies add Rs to things that end in vowels...lol, so this not forced...decent finisher..
.............................;

FlowTied, both had flow...
MultiesShoalin, no brainer
WordplaySinis, even tho there was some i wasnt feelin, overall i liekd more of his...
MetasTied, too close to call forreal
PersonalsShoalin, sin barely had any personals...strange that little nemesis would think it a tie, did you even read the verses boy?...OMG swaying, nevermind
PunchlinesSinis, jus a better quality IMO...had like 2 or 3 iw asnt feelin, but shoalin really started to fall off near the end IMO...

WinnerSinis, he jus took the more important cats...punchlines like

'Men Tell-in Jury's' like a Lawyer

like a Pimp I Tramp-Pulled this Bitch!

Take 'Off-Fin's' like Insulted Whale Poachers

'Rain Blows Down' like Typhoons!

'Miner Talents' like 'Dealing with Claustrophobia'

were beatin stuff like,

Aint Jus Talkin he WRITES-PLAIN!

Jaw Crusher Who Leave Abrasions Real Deep-son

Never SAY OH SIN!" Like Silent Ballots Of The Rock Band!!!!!!!!

Foresee Sin's Like The Average-Year!

Peak Of G.A.M.E" Was Riding Toxn's-Dick!

i mean, Shoalin had better multies and some personals...but i think he over did the "S" shit jus alittle...this was a close battle, but yea....my vote is for Sinis

1-1 upping...

[SiNiS]

Thanks For the Breakdown


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Uppin

[Young Ru]

Flow- Sin........
Multies- Shoa....
Wordplay- Sin.....Shoa your wordplay was forced....Sim and Sin sound nuttin alike...
Punches- Sin....
Personals- Tie....
Overall- Sin....

Shoa u didnt come as hard as Sin.....Point blank period....

[SiNiS]

Thanks for Voting


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[Shoalin]

Played Recognize Played. or in this case vote for it.... now usually id chuck a bitch fit Right here but i cant be fucked. Young Ru Hop The Fuck Off but yeah, continue the votes people.

[Muphaser]

Nice battle...

Flow: Both are pure text.. no flow
Punches: Sho
Multies: SHo
Personals: Sho
Wordplay: Tie.. both had some hot examples

My vote: Shoalin

[Shoalin]

WOW! :shock:
an honest voter.... amazing.
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UPPIN BIATCHEZ

[johnny 5]

flow:Niether
punches:Sin
rhyme scheme:Tie
wordplay:SIN, Shoa coulda came harder
personals:sho
creativity:tie
O/A:SiNis

[SiNiS]

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uppin

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[Shoalin]

^^ nothing like to proof to RTB that i didnt ask for votes, so enjoy that you little fuck stain.


Nice Battle So Far, 3-2 Uppin.

[SiNiS]

^^what??
Dam your a Hater.. the fuckin Hateraid's Spokesman! who's HIV positive! lol

uppin!

[Hollamoney]

SINIS best bar:
Wish me Coyer? SiN will Make a Foyer of this Toyer just for my Entrance as Board Destroyer!
In Fact when Raps Fire like Employers it Leaves Boy Here wit 'Men Tell-in Jury's' like a Lawyer
(mental injury)


Shoalin best bar:
Commin At me Thinkin You Can Box-n-shit Well Watch Me Treat SiN Like "Coverin Midrifts" n Top-This-Bitch
Best Belive he Be Stationery When I Pop-The-Clipz, The Only Time He Reach The "Peak Of G.A.M.E" Was Riding Toxn's-Dick!


FLOW- SINIS
MULTIES-SINIS
PUNCHES-SHOALIN
PERSONALS-TIE
WORDPLAY-TIE
CREATIVITY-TIE
ENJOYMENT-SINIS

This was a close battle but I have to give it to SINIS his verse was just a little better....I was pullin for you Shoalin

MVGT-SINIS

[Hollamoney]

This was a tight battle 4 sure

[SiNiS]

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Uppin

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[Cool c]

THE CATA.

flow:TIE
punches:Sin
rhyme scheme:Tie
wordplay:SIN,
personals:sho
creativity:tie

BEST Bars

SInis -----


Fuck Writtens like Pen Rapist, yes Sinz Greatest and you Cant See Me, Get Lasic!
Dam your Spits Basic! thats why your Battle 'Post Get Handled' like Fence Makers

Check the Location, he works with his Mom! Dont know the Feeling but it must Suck when theres Nobody Knowing Ya
HUH? you Couldn't Deliver working a Maternity Ward cuz you only got 'Miner Talents' like 'Dealing with Claustrophobia'


Shaolin----

You Aint Shit, Now I Progress To Leave Ya Hype-Drained I Land "Drops On SiN's Head" so Its a Definate It Might-Rain
u Cant Stay "Stay Above S Level" In Thiz Fight-Mayne Coz When I Say Sin Drop Like Tha First Flight Aint Jus Talkin he WRITES-PLAIN!

SiN Acts Like Balls, Its Fair To say You Just Keep Hanging To The Cock-Fam an Respected You Not-Man
Watch sin Try Run N Get Popped-Damn! Coz "Voters Would Never SAY OH SIN!" Like Silent Ballots Of The Rock Band!!!!!!!!

THE Overlook :shock:

OK this was great on both parts they both came with different things that was new and hot. I wish they got a little more personal they use a lot of the play on the name game. But overall these where good work and it did meet all the hype.

OVerall Vote:
Sinis

[SiNiS]

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SiNiS is Victorious!



Nice Try Shoalin!



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[Shoalin]

:) yes SiNiS.... "try" ahhahaa.
CLOSED!