[HOT SHIT!] (2)KMC .vs. Conwell(0) [VET VOTES ONLY]

[[King_Mc]]

5-7 Bars

Due ?

Punchline Battle

Cats:

overall punches.
creativity.
multies.
wordplay.
opener.
closer.
enjoyment.
structure.

overall vote.

[Conwell]

alright good u wrote vet vtes only

we really should do the same number of bars so judging this will be easier...ill do 7 since thats the max

im almost finished my shit as soon as you drop yours ill follow up

[[King_Mc]]

KeYeD High aZ heLL.....

sO iT bEgInS



gettin pussy? BREATHLESS after readin the first bar this only time he 'IN-PANTS'
Conwell beating me is like 'APPLAUSES FROM ANOREXICS' cuz its a very 'SLIM-CHANTS'!!
Chance

He-scares-vets? This dude 'GARENTEED TO LOSE SOMEHOW' like 'UNFAIR-BETS'
And when it comes to your SKILL, IT AINT APPARENT but this aint 'UNPREPARED-CHEFS'!!
Skillet

Me win? thats like POLICE DEBRIEFINGS cuz you can TALK-BOUT-THAT-PLAN
This battle like LESBIAN ESCORTS cuz he could never 'WALK OUT-THE-MAN'!!

my bars 'enter his back' as i 'RIP THE METAL OUT HIS MOUTH' like im TAKING-OFF-HIS-BRACES
Any good? King quick to put THE FACTS ON THE TABLE like its REARRANGING-OFFICE-SPACES!!
Fax

Lost-to-you? I got lines like VERBAL DENTISTS but my words just dont 'FLOSS-HIS-TOOTH'
Cuz in this race he 'HANDS DOWN THE LOSER' like this be FINGERING EXPERIENCED PROSTITUTES!!
Looser

This like DEVOTED CATHOLICS KEEPING IN TOUCH cuz his best-is-NONE-TO-ME
And Con bout to be shown he CRACKS UNDER PRESSURE like TESTING DEPTHS-OF-SUBMARINES!!

K's hits sure to send him STRAIGHT DOWN THE MIDDLE OF THE FEILD like this is 'FAIR-BALL-GAMES'
After readin this he feels he NEEDS TO 'CHECK OUT' like CHEATERS GOING BACK TO THEIR-FOUL-WAYS!!

[Conwell]

BEHOLD>>>>>>"KingDumbCum"<<<Thats why his Raps give "Birth" to Down Syndrom____My Verse Will Out Hit Em
Thats cuz My "Barz Confine" and "Trap eeze" so I'ma make this Circus Clown Listen...!!!!
(KINGDOM COME/TRAPEZE

Peepin my Myspace?..I guess dis "Faggot is "cocK"y so Watch as these Punches Let Loose
and Damage-His Body...I aint a Heavy Drinker but I'ma Put "King on Ice" like Las Angeles Hockey!!!

Say "Hi-King" when I lay ya Corpse in the Forest...of Course Con da Hardest<<So how u Stoppin me Cuzz?
Put an End to King like Democracy Doez<<<ez...Call this Battle the "Last Straw" cuz U Obviously Suck..!
(hiking)

With Rhymes So "Sharp" they "Sever his Drop"<<<Only on "CLASSROOM DESKS" is this "Ruler" Ever on Top!!!
I know you juss wanna Pleasure ma Cock cuz This Guys the "King of Sac" and I aint Talkin about Webbers Old Squad!!!
(ruler=measurements//sacremento/ball sack)

I know I'm Sick...but Please reFrain From Cheating...less u wanna C me Lay A-King like dis battle turned to Idol's
Gay MCeeing>>>>But I Cant State a Reason this "King's Writings Would Scare Me" unless his First Name was Steven!!!!
(clay aiken=steven king)

This Guy gave me a PM like Yous Ma Idol!!...but Look at his User Title..."Brackets" were played out Last Month
this is April Now<<<So Ima have to Break it Down<<Soon as ya Clock-In its Over..Your "Don(e) King" like Boxin Promoters!!
(he got brackets/march madness=don king)

We Know Your Ass-king like Pesky Students...so ya Threats-Seem Useless<<<<So You Gotsta Chill
Envy Towards me<<<"More Green" than Dolla Bills cuz he Couldnt "King Con" even if he Copped the Film...!!!
(asking)

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[[King_Mc]]

hmm, lookin for a battle based on punchlines, not nameplay//"personals" :? didnt rly fit the criteria i was lookin 4...

o well, vote up!! (BROKEN DOWN VOTES ONLY)

[Conwell]

yea good shit man...my shit has punches on every line i just mixed nameplays and personals to spice the verse up

[[King_Mc]]

yea but take out the nameplay and ur "personals" and wut do u have??? not a whole lot.. ges u rly didnt get the concept of my callout...

[Conwell]

once again.i have a punchline in every single line..im sure u can se that

u never said punchline battle without using nameplays or personals as a catalyst for the punches

with that said..yea i got punches throughout my whole verse...if u didnt want me to use nameplays and use generic punches u shoulda said so

i usually NEVER use generic punchlines<<<way to easy

so i did what i do

but the punches are there<<<on every line

[[King_Mc]]

my bad man.. i was kinda hoping u seen my previous callouts saying "without nameplay or personals".. but u jst registered so its cool.. doesnt matter to me much tho. just a misunderstanding.. i just wanted to improve on my verses without having them rely on nameplay n personals to take the win nah mean? this battles whatever tho, no biggie..

UPPIN FOR VOTES!!

[lyrical thinka]

Sorry for the freepost... I dont consider myself a vet, but had to say hot battle on both ends.... 8)

[[King_Mc]]

^thx, bumpin for sum votes!!

[Conwell]

yea no doubt man if i saw them posts i woulda def not included them...anyways like u said thi battle was hot as shit..u got nice talent...glad your my first real battle on RD

[pissedgoodnamesaretaken]

Ey nice battle; sense ya'll arent gettin votes want me to give a bar-by-bar breakdown? not a vet but you know im good for a fair vote

[[King_Mc]]

it'd be more then appreciated :wink:

[pissedgoodnamesaretaken]

CONWELL:
BEHOLD>>>>>>"KingDumbCum"<<<Thats why his Raps give "Birth" to Down Syndrom____My Verse Will Out Hit Em
Thats cuz My "Barz Confine" and "Trap eeze" so I'ma make this Circus Clown Listen...!!!!
^^LOL at first line, second line was a bit forced and i mean trap eeze. decent wordply just forced
Peepin my Myspace?..I guess dis "Faggot is "cocK"y so Watch as these Punches Let Loose
and Damage-His Body...I aint a Heavy Drinker but I'ma Put "King on Ice" like Las Angeles Hockey!!!
^^Alright set up, good multies ok punch
Say "Hi-King" when I lay ya Corpse in the Forest...of Course Con da Hardest<<So how u Stoppin me Cuzz?
Put an End to King like Democracy Doez<<<ez...Call this Battle the "Last Straw" cuz U Obviously Suck..!
^^wordplay first line so-so... meta in second line pretty basic.. last straw/obviously suck.. kinda generic
With Rhymes So "Sharp" they "Sever his Drop"<<<Only on "CLASSROOM DESKS" is this "Ruler" Ever on Top!!!
I know you juss wanna Pleasure ma Cock cuz This Guys the "King of Sac" and I aint Talkin about Webbers Old Squad!!!
^^Lol.. im likin this bar really feelin it. set up first line good and second line made me laugh
I know I'm Sick...but Please reFrain From Cheating...less u wanna C me Lay A-King like dis battle turned to Idol's
Gay MCeeing>>>>But I Cant State a Reason this "King's Writings Would Scare Me" unless his First Name was Steven!!!!
^^lol at the second line, the first was ehhhwasnt feelin it
This Guy gave me a PM like Yous Ma Idol!!...but Look at his User Title..."Brackets" were played out Last Month
this is April Now<<<So Ima have to Break it Down<<Soon as ya Clock-In its Over..Your "Don(e) King" like Boxin Promoters!!
^^im liking the second line, first line again setup could have been better
We Know Your Ass-king like Pesky Students...so ya Threats-Seem Useless<<<<So You Gotsta Chill
Envy Towards me<<<"More Green" than Dolla Bills cuz he Couldnt "King Con" even if he Copped the Film...!!!
^^The first line was better than the second, so-so closer it was ok

Overal: Con, yea lines were stretched as hell and your metas were pretty on point but your wordplay was mediocre to alright

KMC:

gettin pussy? BREATHLESS after readin the first bar this only time he 'IN-PANTS'
Conwell beating me is like 'APPLAUSES FROM ANOREXICS' cuz its a very 'SLIM-CHANTS'!!
^^Lol at the second line, im feelin it alot setup coulda been nicer
He-scares-vets? This dude 'GARENTEED TO LOSE SOMEHOW' like 'UNFAIR-BETS'
And when it comes to your SKILL, IT AINT APPARENT but this aint 'UNPREPARED-CHEFS'!!
^^Lol first line very basic but second line i was feelin lol nice W/p
Me win? thats like POLICE DEBRIEFINGS cuz you can TALK-BOUT-THAT-PLAN
This battle like LESBIAN ESCORTS cuz he could never 'WALK OUT-THE-MAN'!!
^^Ehh one of your weaker bars.. wasnt feelin it too much just mediocre
my bars 'enter his back' as i 'RIP THE METAL OUT HIS MOUTH' like im TAKING-OFF-HIS-BRACES
Any good? King quick to put THE FACTS ON THE TABLE like its REARRANGING-OFFICE-SPACES!!
^^Pretty good, straight meta pretty good punch, nothing too special
Lost-to-you? I got lines like VERBAL DENTISTS but my words just dont 'FLOSS-HIS-TOOTH'
Cuz in this race he 'HANDS DOWN THE LOSER' like this be FINGERING EXPERIENCED PROSTITUTES!!
^^Lol pretty good, feelin the meta in the second bar
This like DEVOTED CATHOLICS KEEPING IN TOUCH cuz his best-is-NONE-TO-ME
And Con bout to be shown he CRACKS UNDER PRESSURE like TESTING DEPTHS-OF-SUBMARINES!!
^^Lol had to think of the first line for a second but when i got it pretty nice, second simple but good
K's hits sure to send him STRAIGHT DOWN THE MIDDLE OF THE FEILD like this is 'FAIR-BALL-GAMES'
After readin this he feels he NEEDS TO 'CHECK OUT' like CHEATERS GOING BACK TO THEIR-FOUL-WAYS!!
^^Pretty good closer, not your best line though usually closer shoould be best.. but nice extended meta feelin it

Overal: Pretty good verse i was feelin most of the punches, straight metas not alot of wordplay but thats how the battle was supposed to be.. pretty nice

Flow: neither
Multies: Conwell - just say a while lot more multies from con, nice job
Punches: KMC - straight punches that i was just feelin more, IMO King had better punches
Personals: None really
Metas: King - both had them but i was feelin kings more, king overall had more

OVERALL: [KING MC]

nice battle, KMC just had the straighter, cleaner punches, pretty good verse from both ends i liked readin it

NOW BE GREATFUL YOU CAUGHT ME IN A GENEROUS MOOD LUCKY FUCKS j/p :wink:

[[King_Mc]]

Thanks For The Breakdown Pissed.. Appreciate It

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[Conwell]

nice battle king


BC u really said tie for multis in your breakdown?


you read the battle right?