3-KMC- `vs` -ANTIC-0 {Punchline Battle} -LOCK

[[King_Mc]]

4-6 Bars

Punchline Battle. No Nameplay / Personals

Cats:

Punchlines.
flow.
multies.
opener.
closer.
creativity.
enjoyment.
wordplay.

Due In 1 Hour

Check n G' Luck

[Antic]

I'm in.

[[King_Mc]]

Qwik Ass Key......................................




Cuz you know that Antic AFRAID OF USING DEADLY FLOW like he FEAR-CROOKS-PISSIN
Dude fell off! he CANT PICTURE WHAT HE USE TO BE like his PAST YEAR-BOOKS-MISSIN!!

i'll have him more than think that HIS LIFE ON THE LINE but this aint TRAGIC-PRANK-CALLS
Cuz King quick to have him SHAKEN WITH QUESTIONS like ASKING THE MAGIC-8-BALL!!

his soft-talent-stop-me? he DOOMED FROM THE CHECK like CALLS-FOUND-IN-HOCKEY
And Antic, you be known to SLIP UP IN UR RIDING but this aint OFF-BALANCE-JOCKEYS!!
writing

u kno Im his heroine! I'll give his STEPS HIS OWN MEDICINE the way that ADDICTS-STEP-ON-PINS
Cuz his text is TOO SMALL TO MAKE A CASE like PROBLEMS BEFORE FORENSIC EVIDENCE!!

King'll-smash-foes! Even with the WISHES OF WOMEN TRANSEXUALS he still cant BE-A-MAN-THOUGH
Rappin? theres no way his "FLY" ARTS COULD GET ATTENTON even under the 'WING-OF-VAN-GOGH'!!

[Antic]

Comin' wit Haste...


I’ll Fist Ya Up To My Elbow, Yank Out Ya Colon, Make Ya Eat It…
Blend Up Ya ‘Shit Trackz’ And Make Ya ‘Taste Tha Remix’!!//

Jam My Dick In Ya Ear And Piss, Only Now Dis ‘Head Filled Wit Flow’…
Celebrity Death-Hunt On This Punk, Way He Killed By “Prose”!!//
{Prose/Pros}

‘Suck Tha Spirit’ Out Ya Bodily Confine, Now Ya Soul Roam Freely
Jerk Out All Ya Teeth And Cop ‘The Roots’ Like I Stole Ya CD…//

Leave Ya 'Hurt And Fucked', Way This ‘C.unt Is Known’…
Kill Every “Nirvana” Head, Way My Style ‘Blast And Numb’ Ya Dome!!//
{Nirvana-Nerve On A}

Spill Out Ya Organz And Tie Ya Up, Way I “Rap” Wit Gutz…
Vengeful Squirrel, Cut Ya Balls Off, Now Dis Girl ‘Has No Nuts’!!//
{Rap/Wrap}

[[King_Mc]]

Thanks For The Qwik Battle Homie :D

VET VOTES!!!!!

[GTech]

Punchlines: KMC
flow: TIE
multies: ahh none..
opener: Antic (Lmao laffed at that line)
closer: KMC (Weak from Antic)
creativity: TIE
enjoyment: KMC (Antic only had me going from his first bar, after that nothin was really entertaining)
wordplay: Antic

o/a vote: King_Mc

Vote in my battles in RD2 if you haven't plz. Much Apreciated

[Red Tha Baron]

Cuz you know that Antic AFRAID OF USING DEADLY FLOW like he FEAR-CROOKS-PISSIN
Dude fell off! he CANT PICTURE WHAT HE USE TO BE like his PAST YEAR-BOOKS-MISSIN!!
first line connects but it jus sounds wierd...iono..second punch a good wordplay punch

i'll have him more than think that HIS LIFE ON THE LINE but this aint TRAGIC-PRANK-CALLS
Cuz King quick to have him SHAKEN WITH QUESTIONS like ASKING THE MAGIC-8-BALL!!
first line..that meta isnt worded well..you coulda done more with that set up..but the second punchline i was feelin, clean....

his soft-talent-stop-me? he DOOMED FROM THE CHECK like CALLS-FOUND-IN-HOCKEY
And Antic, you be known to SLIP UP IN UR RIDING but this aint OFF-BALANCE-JOCKEYS!!
first line is good, second one however is shit...lol, sorry jus my opinion.

u kno Im his heroine! I'll give his STEPS HIS OWN MEDICINE the way that ADDICTS-STEP-ON-PINS
Cuz his text is TOO SMALL TO MAKE A CASE like PROBLEMS BEFORE FORENSIC EVIDENCE!!
first line is iight...kinda decent at best...second line is weak too...jus not feelin this bar

King'll-smash-foes! Even with the WISHES OF WOMEN TRANSEXUALS he still cant BE-A-MAN-THOUGH
Rappin? theres no way his "FLY" ARTS COULD GET ATTENTON even under the 'WING-OF-VAN-GOGH'!!
first line is sorta played...second line had a decent set up and nice punchline...feelin this finisher right hurr..
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I’ll Fist Ya Up To My Elbow, Yank Out Ya Colon, Make Ya Eat It…
Blend Up Ya ‘Shit Trackz’ And Make Ya ‘Taste Tha Remix’!!//
...im seriously not feelin this one

Jam My Dick In Ya Ear And Piss, Only Now Dis ‘Head Filled Wit Flow’…
Celebrity Death-Hunt On This Punk, Way He Killed By “Prose”!!//
first line is decent...kinda played with tha flow/piss thing..second punchline is better, but still kinda ehhhh..

‘Suck Tha Spirit’ Out Ya Bodily Confine, Now Ya Soul Roam Freely
Jerk Out All Ya Teeth And Cop ‘The Roots’ Like I Stole Ya CD…//
lol, i was feelin that punchline...dope actually

Leave Ya 'Hurt And Fucked', Way This ‘C.unt Is Known’…
Kill Every “Nirvana” Head, Way My Style ‘Blast And Numb’ Ya Dome!!//
first line is played IMO...second line is kinda ehh again, the wordplay is clean but the punch is kinda iffy

Spill Out Ya Organz And Tie Ya Up, Way I “Rap” Wit Gutz…
Vengeful Squirrel, Cut Ya Balls Off, Now Dis Girl ‘Has No Nuts’!!//
ummm...not feelin this

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FlowTied, both flowed well...
MultiesA, yall did tha multies ONLY at the end of each line...but antic had the hunt/punk inner multie..so he gets this
MetasK, jus better quality IMO
PunchesK, he had more that i was feelin...had a proper punch in each line rather than a set up punch and than a final punch like antic did..
Set UpsTied, yall had some nice shit in this cat...
WordplayTied, both had some good shit and some sloppy shit

WinnerKMC, honestly had the stronger hitting punchlines...good keystyle battle...

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Punchlines. K
flow.Tied
multies. An, stated why aleady
opener. K
closer. K
creativity. Tied
enjoyment. K
wordplay. Tied

Overall Vote: KMC

[[King_Mc]]

thx for the breakdown homie, appreciate it..

1-0 Bump

[lyrical thinka]

Punchlines. KMC
flow. KMC
multies. KMC
opener. KMC
closer. KMC
creativity. Antic
enjoyment. TIE
wordplay. Antic

O/A::KMC

[Antic]

Punchlines. KMC
flow. KMC
multies. KMC
opener. KMC
closer. KMC
creativity. Antic
enjoyment. TIE
wordplay. Antic

O/A::KMC

^^Re-Re vote.

3-0 King...Nice battle, dug the time-limit thing, hit me up anytime if ya want to do it again, that was dope.

[[King_Mc]]

word man, great battle.. keep doin ya thing homie

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