(3)Antic vs. BCtheCrook(0) CLOSED!

[Antic]

3 barz.

[Antic]

Super-quick key....


Like Circuses Wit No Midgetz, Ya Shit Got No “Impact”!
Shit’s Wack!
Stick A Crowbar Up His Anus And Twist, Way I ‘Ripped Ass’!!//
{Impact/Imp Act}

I Get Bored And “Maytag” Bitch Like Defacin’ Appliancez!
Silence Bitch!
Arrogant Kid ‘Can’t See Beyond Himself’ Even Wit His Eyelidz Slit!//
{Maytag/May Tag-Appliance Brand}

“Robin Hood”? Crook?? Bitch You Only Steal In Suburbz!
Fucker!
My ‘Shine’ Scorch Ya Skin Off ‘Like Albinos Peel In Summer’!//
{Robin Hood-Rob In Hood}

[Antic]

uppin' for BC's drop.

[Antic]

Decent verse, kinda feel like ya took too long on it, but...whatever.

votez up.

[Antic]

It meanz you took forever to crank out 3 barz, that'z all.

[KMA]

Let's see if I still know how to vote.

Antic

Like Circuses Wit No Midgetz, Ya Shit Got No “Impact”!
Shit’s Wack!
Stick A Crowbar Up His Anus And Twist, Way I ‘Ripped Ass’!!//
{Impact/Imp Act}

The first bar's fresh. I also like the way you write your bars, with the extra insult in between. I didn't much care for the second bar. Just seems too simple to me.

I Get Bored And “Maytag” Bitch Like Defacin’ Appliancez!
Silence Bitch!
Arrogant Kid ‘Can’t See Beyond Himself’ Even Wit His Eyelidz Slit!//
{Maytag/May Tag-Appliance Brand}

I liked the concept here. The wordplay came off smooth, and the meta in the second line was just as nice.

“Robin Hood”? Crook?? Bitch You Only Steal In Suburbz!
Fucker!
My ‘Shine’ Scorch Ya Skin Off ‘Like Albinos Peel In Summer’!//
{Robin Hood-Rob In Hood}

I'm not sure if Robin Hood is another alias of his... and if it is I'm sure he's heard it a thousand times. If it isn't his alias, well it kind of has no relevance to the bar, methinks. Second line was a creative punch.

Overall:
8.6/10

BcTheCrook

Thrown 'A Down', Fingers Disrespecting Ya Shy-Town Now Lie Down
Cuz My Punches Done Viciously Press'd Ock Like Brokers Thats Tied Down
[press'd Ock/Pressed Stock][Chi-town/Shy-town/Location]

I think this was a great concept in the first bar. I'm not sure it came out to it's potential, but you did make good use of the concept. Second bar is great. Loved that wordplay.

Leavin His Chest Loosely In , Blowin Up The Fuckin Booth He In
Leader of The Kongo? But Ya Whole Click Full Of Hoochie Men
[hoochie men/Ho Chi Mihn/Look his name up]

First bar's filler. Good wordplay in the second. Nothing spectacular.

See A-Thesitic , SO Aint No 'Rap Allah G' Got Him Wondering Why Cant I Bite?
Even on a Slant I Fight,
You winning That's Like Puttin X Over God, Like You Giving Birth to the Ant-I-Christ
[rap allah G/rapology][rest is self explanatory]

The first line's not really a punch, but the wordplay was ok. Second line's pretty good.

Flow: Antic
Punches: Antic
Personals: Bc
Metaphors: Bc

Overall: I think Antic took this one. I felt like Bc focused too much on metas and wordplay and not enough on hard-hitting punches. Antic's verse was just more effective at utilizing metas and shit into good punches.

[Cats_Pajamas]

Flow: Antic
Punches: Antic
Personals: NA
Mutlies: BC
Wordplay: BC
Enjoyment: Antic

Overall: Antic

[Antic]

I thought about ya PM, BC, and your problem wit Cat Pajamaz Haz Nuthin' To Do Wit Me...I Say His Vote Countz...We Can A Mod Ruling If Ya Still Disagree. He Battlez Like A Vet, And I'm Fine Wit His Vote.

[Antic]

2-0 Antic...uppin' for 1 or 2 more votez.

[Antic]

Uppin' for 1 more vote...

[Antic]

2-0 Antic, uppin'....vote, and I'll RTF.

[Red Tha Baron]

FlowAntic
PunchesAntic
MutliesBC
WordplayTied
MetasAntic

MyVoteAntic
3-0 KO