0-Undefined [VS] 3-KMC [PUNCHLINE BATTLE] -LOCK-

[[King_Mc]]

3-5 Barz Due Whenever

Cats:

flow.
complexity.
multies.
wordplay.
metaphors.
OHH factor.


overall vote.

Good? G'Luck

~Check~

[uN.dEfiNed]

cool homie. check.

[uN.dEfiNed]

dang homie. im wondering wholl vote for me. :cry: . im a newb, and youre a master, and members respect you, even me. but will they vote for me even with sicker punches?

hopefully itll be about the punches, not the mc. :? | :(

[[King_Mc]]

i see what your saying, you are more then welcome to get vets from your site to come over and vote.. like we get 2-3 RESPECTABLE vets from ur site n same from mine nah mean? just to make this as fair as possible for you.. good?

[[King_Mc]]

I Got To Drop Now Tho, Might Be Gone For A Couple Days So I Wont Keep You Waiting......................................




A KO? I Have Him 'DROP IN / DROPPIN THE MATCH' Like A PYRO'S DEFIANCE
Why this fake Even tryin?
Cuz King Leave You 'DOWN, FOR GOOD' Like He JOINING A HERO'S ALLIANCE..!!


If you wanna talk 'technically', ZERO IS NOTHING so whats he gonna count HIS SCORE with?
He 'checked off' like a chore list...
He claimin a vet? we seen how that LIE LACK APPEAL like 'job shadowing a FLORIST'..!!
lilac a peal


Try this kid? Undefined ONLY THINKS OF 'BEATING ME' like this be SILENT SINS...
Comin Here Thinkin He High n Shit
Cuz truth is dude aint JACK 'OUT OF THE BOX' like GIVING TOYS TO VIOLENT KIDS..!!


The best fall? this guy like a 'UNFAIR GAMBLER', once he sees this, the BETS OFF...
Noob Goin For a Vet Call...?
I guess Undefined was just 'WIRED TO SUCK' like CONSTRUCTING SEX DOLLS..!!


I leave him stapled up! Your mouth is like WRAPPING PRESENTS, you should just TAPE IT SHUT
This dude fake and such
So Undefined can TAKE MY PUNCHES AND SLICE HIMSELF so he can finally 'MAKE THE CUT'..!!

[uN.dEfiNed]

forgive me homie. i can only drop 2 bars now, but i thought it was supposed to be 3 bars not 5? thats cool. ill drop the other 3 in a day or two, ill be offline for a while. thanks.



Sick Shyt? Ya Punches too shallow to Sink Ships | lyke A Fake Oasis - come taste this!
Cuz Ima drop into King's {Career} like a Kamakazi Drop With the {Japanese} Heart-Pacing

{Japanese/Jap & ease = kinda playd. jap = upper cut punch, ease = easy}
{Career/Carrier = aircraft carriers. ?lol}

If your lookin For "The King Mc" As in the best on RD you've met him BCTC and i dont
think u wanna battle him he gets kinda ill on verses... just makes my eyes sick when readin them

Fa Real? Ya verses Under-The-Surface in meaning, like scripture - "{approach} decieving"
Cuz the way King drops, he couldn't {rap-ill} with {tonsils} posessed by demons!

{approach/up-roach - under da surface* - cocaroaches underground}
{rap-ill/rappel = Using a rope to descend from a climb (see drop)}
{tonsils/toned-Seals = toned (means built/fit), Seals (US Seals - Army)}

[[King_Mc]]

VOTES!!!! btw, i sed 3-5, but its cool, no problem..

[uN.dEfiNed]

forgive me homie. i think ill stay with the 2 bars if its okay (really pushing my luck here) lol. but thanks for this battle. peace. :wink: uppin for votes (dang man, i already feel dead)

[[King_Mc]]

it's cool.. only established vets can vote on this.. broken down votes are much appreciated too :wink:

[pissedgoodnamesaretaken]

KING MC:
A KO? I Have Him 'DROP IN / DROPPIN THE MATCH' Like A PYRO'S DEFIANCE
Why this fake Even tryin?
Cuz King Leave You 'DOWN, FOR GOOD' Like He JOINING A HERO'S ALLIANCE..!!
like the first line, simple but good punch.. second line was even better lol
3.5/5

If you wanna talk 'technically', ZERO IS NOTHING so whats he gonna count HIS SCORE with?
He 'checked off' like a chore list...
He claimin a vet? we seen how that LIE LACK APPEAL like 'job shadowing a FLORIST'..!!
First line was kinda ehh. filler looked like. second line was pretty good after i thought about it for a second
3/5

Try this kid? Undefined ONLY THINKS OF 'BEATING ME' like this be SILENT SINS...
Comin Here Thinkin He High n Shit
Cuz truth is dude aint JACK 'OUT OF THE BOX' like GIVING TOYS TO VIOLENT KIDS..!!
Ehh probably one of your weaker lines, still mediocre at best
2/5

The best fall? this guy like a 'UNFAIR GAMBLER', once he sees this, the BETS OFF...
Noob Goin For a Vet Call...?
I guess Undefined was just 'WIRED TO SUCK' like CONSTRUCTING SEX DOLLS..!!
Simple first line but still pretty nice, liked the second line again pretty simple but good punch
2.5/5

I leave him stapled up! Your mouth is like WRAPPING PRESENTS, you should just TAPE IT SHUT
This dude fake and such
So Undefined can TAKE MY PUNCHES AND SLICE HIMSELF so he can finally 'MAKE THE CUT'..!!
First line filler IMO. second line pretty nice, not your best bar by still pretty nice punch
3/5

OV: 14, nice metas, your opener was definatly the best line and some nice bars in the middle then picked it back up at the end and nice new bar structure lol :wink:

Un.Defined
Sick Shyt? Ya Punches too shallow to Sink Ships | lyke A Fake Oasis - come taste this!
Cuz Ima drop into King's {Career} like a Kamakazi Drop With the {Japanese} Heart-Pacing
Ehh first line filler and i wasnt feelin the second line too much, i mean you had the wordplay but it just was a bit forced like ease/easy? ehh not feelin it
2/5

Fa Real? Ya verses Under-The-Surface in meaning, like scripture - "{approach} decieving"
Cuz the way King drops, he couldn't {rap-ill} with {tonsils} posessed by demons!
First line was good, second line i wasnt feelin too much, again kinda forced wordplay and is it just me or do Demons And Decieving not rhyme?
3/5

OV:5, overall yea verse was alright, wordplay was there puncehs kinda missed keep elevatin and focus more on punches and wordplay just comes then

VOTE: KING_MC
The 5-2 bar handicap played a bit of a roll but i still think King won fairly..

[[King_Mc]]

thanks man, appreciate the breakdown. . .1-0

Bumpin, leave a link. . .

[uN.dEfiNed]

yeah, thanks again homie. lol waiting for the k.o ima get ! :wink:

[[King_Mc]]

Bump. . .

[Anesthetic]

flow - King
punches - King
personals - Ehh.
complexity - Un
multies King
wordplay King
metaphors - Ehh.
OHH factor - King

Un. Some of your wordplay should've been cleaner.

O/a vote - King

[uN.dEfiNed]

yeah word. i could have done better, that was some stupid shyt i admit. seriously, i came up wid it like in 5 mins. until next time, ill do much better. lol upping for my k.o homies. :wink:

[Red Tha Baron]

flowKing
punchesKing
personalsTied
complexityTied
multiesKing
wordplayKing
metaphorsTied
OHH factorKing

MyVoteKing
un., some your wordplay was seriously forced...shit like
rap-ill/rappel
tonsils/toned-Seals
Career/Carrier

i guess they work but you have to pronounce them very wierd...are you from IHH? cuz they gotta a history of forcing wordplay jus to make up new concepts....

[Red Tha Baron]

oh
i now see in your sig that you are from IHH...lol

[uN.dEfiNed]

lol, thanks red for that! nah dawg, seriously i just shitted those 2 bars outta nowhere. i got better shit. seriously dawg. and thanks for the vote bro, i got k.o'd by king.

YEPEEEEE !!!!! :D lol just kidding. :wink: until next time king, better be prepared. lol