Alfa-Q vs Un.Defined

[alfa-q]

1 bar lol

House Rules


Check il drop later got n lil work to do 1st

[uN.dEfiNed]

check. 1 bar. ill drop mine later too! :wink:

[uN.dEfiNed]

Springbox: South Africa's national animal i think. ehh, nicknamed after their rugby team, the springbox - their like in the same family as dear i think.

Exaughsted Springbox? like Cinema Security, I best "Satisfy These {Lines}" and create a New {Queue}, Just ta "Get Rid Of You"!
Beat Me? Fuck That Thought~{I'll Fuck You}! cause even Ya {Pre-Drafts} couldn't "Blow Me Away" if you became My "Biggest {Fan}" Fool!

lol this wordplay. just say it fast dammit!
{Lines/Lions=Springbox is prey to lions. they get exaughsted by being chased by lions, and people get exaughsteed too in Cinema lines!}
{Queue/Q=Alfa-Q}{Just wanna end lines and get rid of the people in them fast!}
{I'll Fuck You/Alfa-Q}{Pre-Drafts=a pre-written rap. also a 'draft' is a slight wind or breeze}
{Fan/get it? a motored fan? you cant 'blow me away' even if youre my biggest FAN?} lol

k. homie, uppin for yours. lol gulp. :cry: oh, and thank god youre no noob, cause like i said, if you were, id would have just fucked the shit outta ya wid this 1 bar lol.

[uN.dEfiNed]

also homie. make this a punchline battle! change the title too. thanks.

[alfa-q]

Sorry forgot this il key something i gotta battle with ju so dats like high pro at the moment...

Best you Listen~Bru People "think your my Wife" Coz All ur Punches "Mrs. Q"{Misses} so this wat this vets~gon~do to bring death~on~you...
Alfa's a whole wrecking-crew...coz even if {UN Cordinated Dancers} "Uncordinated Dancers" you Jus Couldnt "Step On Queue"{Q}...

rushed lol w/e vote

[uN.dEfiNed]

good battle yo. ehh, so where ya from? johanesburg, capetown? anyways, upping for votes homies.
:wink:

[Cats_Pajamas]

Flow: Al
Punches: Un
Personals: Al
Multies: Tie
Metaz: Un
Wordplay: Un
Enjoyment: Tie

Overall: Un

Real close battle, but Undefined took this. Alpha obviously didnt put forth his best effort. Undefined is becoming a solid RD battler, keep it up. A word of advice, dont make something so complicated that you need such an in depth explanation. Part of enjoying a verse is getting something without having to have it told to you.

_-Peace-_

[uN.dEfiNed]

thanks homie! uppin for votes

[alfa-q]

Flow: Al
A word of advice, dont make something so complicated that you need such an in depth explanation. Part of enjoying a verse is getting something without having to have it told to you.

_-Peace-_

:D I remember telling some1 this....


lol thanx 4 voting

[Cats_Pajamas]

Was it you that told me that??? :D

OH YEAH :shock:

In the TLI Forum :lol:

Just passing down my rap knowledge as those before us 8) lol

[uN.dEfiNed]

yeah thanks again, i shall keep that in mind homie! upping for votes :shock:

[uN.dEfiNed]

uppin for damn votes homie! hey, wait a second. shouldnt i get that personals too cats? ah well, thats k. upping yo :wink:

[uN.dEfiNed]

still uppin for votes. :cry: here too tired to write the vote catergories? copy + paste then homies:

vocab:
multies:
punches:
flow:
wordplay:
nameplay:
personals:
enjoyment:

overall:

[pissedgoodnamesaretaken]

vocab: Un
multies: Q
punches: Q
flow: TIE
wordplay: Q
nameplay: TIE
personals: NONE
enjoyment: TIE

overall: Alfa-Q

Both had good punches but Undefined, ive senn all that stuff been said about alfa, the (queue ive sen before and the Ill fuck you up was said before by annie) alfa's was more of a punch too... i dunno if you;ll except this sense me an Q are crew but just in case you do.

[uN.dEfiNed]

dude, relax. ill take it. 1-1. the thing is i keyd that too, thats why the wordplay kinda sucked. i didnt know annie w/e used that too either. but in terms of a "punch', just try and understand how to approach it.

[pissedgoodnamesaretaken]

what do you mean relax? all i was askin is if you would except it..
and i didnt say your wordplay was bad either, i said it was played... and its not a thing which i dont understand your punch its just how my vote was.

[uN.dEfiNed]

lol who cares.

1-1. uppin for votes.

YES, JUST LEAVE THIS THREAD AND NOT VOTE ...lol, jk...copy and paste this!

vocab:
multies:
punches:
flow:
wordplay:
nameplay:
personals:
enjoyment:

overall:

[uN.dEfiNed]

uppin votes. :D