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Anesthetic
05-25-2007, 02:39 PM
3 bars house rules
rd2
4 days to drop from check
no crew votes
whatever else

CheKK.. :evil:

Anesthetic
05-26-2007, 06:40 AM
Lemme know when your verse is done, cuz I keyed mine yesterday.

Anesthetic
05-28-2007, 06:08 PM
No access to the net over the weekend. Went outta town. Lemme know if you're still gonna drop.

Young_Ghost
05-29-2007, 09:30 AM
yeah, im still droppin

Young_Ghost
05-30-2007, 09:39 AM
'lookin for a win'? it'll be a 'Burden-ta-Find-It', cuz with your 'eyez, punchez Merge-N-ya-Blinded'
'step outta place', and like 'arranging garden plants' i'll 'put this Herb-in-Alignment'!/
couldnt even {be average} if I 'Curved-an-Assignment', so ya Hurt-to-See-Mine
the way i {move N Murk-Your-E-lines} like a 'Surge-in-the-Climate'!//
{B-Average} {Movin Mercury Lines}

'trying to hold on to this' you'll 'crash-N-burn' like im 'Touchin-the-Pilots-Hands', Punches-'Arrive-N-Land'
'they want me to rid RD of you', sayin {Run-N-Purge, Hurry!} like 'Rushin-to-Lie-at-Stands'!/
to Destruction-this-Guy-is-Damned, 'come to your home' and your Head'll-go-POW!
cuz i bring {Lead to Locales} like 'Instruction-in-Diet-Plans'!//
{Runnin Purgery} {Led to Low Cals(calories)}

like 'tricky thieves invading homes' i'll 'Break-Through-ya-Back', and 'stomp' till im 'Makin-you-Flat'
Annie's 'facin a monster', and 'taunting horned animals' is the only way you have {Capable} Raps!/
my 'bars' are 'Inescapable-Traps' so theres no chance Annie Beat'em-at-All
so fatal blows {Beasting-ya-Jaws} like 'insect Facial-Attacks'!//
{Cape-a-Bull} {Bee Sting Ya Jaws}

lol

whenever your ready... 8)

Anesthetic
05-30-2007, 10:17 AM
Oh. Didn't know you posted.

Look Bitch! Despite Your Ranking (http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=52522), This Is A Fashion Show With Blind Judges ' Your Style Is Irrelevant (http://www.rockfishoutdoorcenter.org/images/Crazy%20Dress.jpg)'
This Other-Wordly Apparition Couldn't Touch Me, If I Had A Visit From Somethin' Heaven-Sent!! (http://battellemedia.com/images/sistine%20chapel.jpg)
Cuz When I Slice, N Singapore Inuit Hurtz (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Singapore).. Like An Eskimo That'z Injured, And Out Of His Element!! (http://content.answers.com/main/content/wp/en/thumb/c/cc/200px-SteinMummy.jpg)
{Sink-A-Pore-In-You, It-Hurtz}

His Rhymes'll-Get-Sneered.. One Punch, Lightz Out! S'Like "Throwing Away Paintin' Materialz..."..His-Easel-Get-Cleared!! (http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/easel)
Fuck It, Detail Carz N "Take It To Wax!" Bitch, "Watch Your Vinyl-Get-Smeared!"
Your Lyricz Are Like Marinez Who Golf, "Sub, Par!" So Like "An Agonizing Pregnancy" Watch Bitch's-Spinal-Get-Pierced (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Epidural)
{Eyes'll Get Cleared}


...I'm bout ta take it back to dayz when ppl on this site had skillz...


+[RD Power Rankings #1]+
Net Record: +[25 Winz] [16 Ko'z] [1 Loss]+
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-Shoalin
ASP
SiiNiDE
Leto
KMC
Young Ghost - #1 Crew


#1?! Nah, You're The Lesser-Man, With Desperate-Plans! Sorry I'm Mimicking A Kangaroo Rat... But I'll "Leave Young Buried In The Desert Sand (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kangaroo_rat)"
Skillz?! Never-Man, Ur Just A Desperate-Dan, With "Punchez Written At Jackson's Abode (http://www.mtv.com/shared/media/news/images/j/Jackson,_Michael/sq-michael-what-more-shoot-fist-et.jpg)".... They Certainly "NEVER, LAND"
U Not Clever-Man! Who You Better-Than? You Can't Measure Up To This Vet!! You're Short A Few Points Like Severed Hands!!

Red Tha Baron
05-30-2007, 05:41 PM
'lookin for a win'? it'll be a 'Burden-ta-Find-It', cuz with your 'eyez, punchez Merge-N-ya-Blinded'.'step outta place', and like 'arranging garden plants' i'll 'put this Herb-in-Alignment'!/
couldnt even {be average} if I 'Curved-an-Assignment', so ya Hurt-to-See-Mine.the way i {move N Murk-Your-E-lines} like a 'Surge-in-the-Climate'!//
nice muties..some simple but okay punches, kinda wordplay that got good set ups but not complex...final punch was good, and i was feelin the b average line you had in therre..

'trying to hold on to this' you'll 'crash-N-burn' like im 'Touchin-the-Pilots-Hands', Punches-'Arrive-N-Land'
'they want me to rid RD of you', sayin {Run-N-Purge, Hurry!} like 'Rushin-to-Lie-at-Stands'!/
to Destruction-this-Guy-is-Damned, 'come to your home' and your Head'll-go-POW!
cuz i bring {Lead to Locales} like 'Instruction-in-Diet-Plans'!//
nice multies and okay flow..was feelin the first punchline, kay shit bruh..but that runnin purgery shit was sorta whack..iono, not feelin that line...the final one had nice wordplay..good bar overall i guess.

like 'tricky thieves invading homes' i'll 'Break-Through-ya-Back', and 'stomp' till im 'Makin-you-Flat'
Annie's 'facin a monster', and 'taunting horned animals' is the only way you have {Capable} Raps!/
my 'bars' are 'Inescapable-Traps' so theres no chance Annie Beat'em-at-All
so fatal blows {Beasting-ya-Jaws} like 'insect Facial-Attacks'!//
first line is iight..second line was kinda gay IMO..final punch was cool, i was feelin it as a finisher..

................................................

Look Bitch! Despite Your Ranking, This Is A Fashion Show With Blind Judges ' Your Style Is Irrelevant'
This Other-Wordly Apparition Couldn't Touch Me, If I Had A Visit From Somethin' Heaven-Sent!!
Cuz When I Slice, N Singapore Inuit Hurtz.. Like An Eskimo That'z Injured, And Out Of His Element!!
i see you are now going to fill your verses wit links like 1GMC huh...anyway i dont like the links, but the first line was a okay personal.. second one was cool..final punchline was nice..feelin this bar save for the links

His Rhymes'll-Get-Sneered.. One Punch, Lightz Out! S'Like "Throwing Away Paintin' Materialz..."..His-Easel-Get-Cleared!!
Fuck It, Detail Carz N "Take It To Wax!" Bitch, "Watch Your Vinyl-Get-Smeared!"
Your Lyricz Are Like Marinez Who Golf, "Sub, Par!" So Like "An Agonizing Pregnancy" Watch Bitch's-Spinal-Get-Pierced
easel/eyes'll..LMFAO..no
http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/easel
the pronunciation key clearly shows its not the same, but you are mr "ten a key !!"...still forced..second line was nice..sub, par...good flip of that concept..i was feelin that..but the first line is forced.

#1?! Nah, You're The Lesser-Man, With Desperate-Plans! Sorry I'm Mimicking A Kangaroo Rat... But I'll "Leave Young Buried In The Desert Sand"
Skillz?! Never-Man, Ur Just A Desperate-Dan, With "Punchez Written At Jackson's Abode".... They Certainly "NEVER, LAND"
U Not Clever-Man! Who You Better-Than? You Can't Measure Up To This Vet!! You're Short A Few Points Like Severed Hands!!
nice multies for a change..first punch is alittle corny IMO..you use desperate twice in ya multies...you usin neverland wordplay? um....okay....final punchline was nice, feelin that punchline alone anyway

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FlowNah, both of you were stretched like limos..whut the fuck?..
MultiesGhost, longer and seemed to have more than annie..
PunchesGhost, therre was some stuff i was really feelin and other shit that was kinda just decent or bad..annie had some played shit and a forced one..woulda been tied if annie came consistent
WordplayTied, yea i know annie had some played and forced shit..but some of ghosts wordplay was kinda simple..but both had some dope shit in the category still considering the bad stuff..
PersonalsAnnie, came with nameplay and real personals flipped into wordplay..ghost had none on the contrary...
OpenerTied, i was feelin both of yalls..both had some good, long wordplays and had hard hitting punchlines..
FinisherGhost, while i wasnt feelin the capable line, the rest was good..annies finisher had showed he was straining for multies alittle and that neverland flip was not good, should never use neverland punches in this day and age IMO

MyVoteYoung Ghost, both of yall had some nice punchlines and wordplay..but i believe young ghost had the more original wordplay and his was not forced..annies wasnt really forced except for the easel line tho..but i still feel ghost had the fresher concepts..as far as punchlines i felt both of you had some dope quotables,

cuz i bring {Lead to Locales} like 'Instruction-in-Diet-Plans'!//

When I Slice, N Singapore Inuit Hurtz.. Like An Eskimo That'z Injured, And Out Of His Element!!

but again, more of youngs punchlines hit harder to me..young got the multies no doubt, and annie easily got the personals, i was really feelin that one about havin a visit from soemthin heaven sent..this was a good battle but it came down to who had stronger punches, and not jus the final punchlines.annie had good shit but some of your punches leading to the final punch were weak, some were nice dont get me wrong.but some were weak..and you had more weak shit than ghost.shit like this,

'trying to hold on to this' you'll 'crash-N-burn' like im 'Touchin-the-Pilots-Hands', Punches-'Arrive-N-Land'
like 'tricky thieves invading homes' i'll 'Break-Through-ya-Back', and 'stomp' till im 'Makin-you-Flat
couldnt even {be average} if I 'Curved-an-Assignment'
beat out these starter punches

This Is A Fashion Show With Blind Judges ' Your Style Is Irrelevant'
Your Lyricz Are Like Marinez Who Golf, "Sub, Par!
I'm Mimicking A Kangaroo Rat... But I'll "Leave Young Buried In The Desert Sand"

1-0 uppin

Anesthetic
05-30-2007, 07:04 PM
easel/eyes'll..LMFAO..no
http://www.m-w.com/dictionary/easel
the pronunciation key clearly shows its not the same, but you are mr "ten a key !!"...still forced..second line was nice..sub, par...good flip of that concept..i was feelin that..but the first line is forced.

Actually.

Kernerman English Multilingual Dictionary (Beta Version) - Cite This Source
easel [ˈiːzl] noun
a (hinged) stand for supporting a blackboard, an artist's picture etc

http://dictionary.reference.com/search?r=2&q=easel

Alternate pronunciations are listed, which is why I added the link in there.. (If you'd have bothered to look at more than one occurence..) I know how the word can, and is pronounced, in each of its derivatives. So yeah. Be easy. I know what I'm doing.

SiNiS
05-30-2007, 07:19 PM
Best Battle I have read in a while.. Good Job!

Wont Vote cuz it will start drama..

-2-

Anesthetic
05-30-2007, 07:26 PM
Oh God. Just go ahead and vote.

SiNiS
05-31-2007, 12:29 AM
Flow: Ghost
Punches: Ghost
Personals: Tie
Multies: GHost
Meta's: Anne
Compexity: Anne
Consistancy: Tie
Opener: Ghost
Closer: Tie

Vote Young Ghost


-2-

Anesthetic
05-31-2007, 06:49 AM
:roll: Two-Nill, Ghost.

phatfarm411
05-31-2007, 07:27 AM
aight dis was a hot battle, but i still think the one wit Rice was better

Flow: i think Annie had this jus because reading over Ghost's drop it didnt run as smoothly, and i had to go bak over lines to interpret them properly, Annie's was much easier to read

Punches: Tie, i think both came wit some hot punches, Annie got more personal throughout the drop, Ghost wasnt really concistent wit it, but both were hot

Personals: Annie, he jus referred to Ghost alot more in his text, i saw maybe 2 lines about Annie directly in Ghost's drop

Multies: tie, both look'd like dey had multis in every line, and dey were pretty complex, which is wat i would expect from 2 of our top heads

Meta's: Ghost, he jus seemed to have more in depth metas, and dug deeper into the concept

Compexity: Ghost again he had some crazy metas, and his multis were sick, and unless you are more educated den most, u woulda had trouble understanding his drop

Consistancy: Annie jus cuz he kept it more personal which is wat a battle is about, or at least dats wat i look for in a battle

Similes: Annie, after reading the closer i gave this one to ya, it made me chuckle which is neccesary for a battle.. and it was a good reference

Opener: Ghost, jus cuz dem multis he used to open it were sick, and flow real good

Closer: Annie.. dat Micheal Jackson reference really made me laugh and took it for me



Vote: Annie, dis was a real close battle, but i dont think Annie deserves to be shut out like dis, it was alot closer den da voters have portrayed

Young_Ghost
05-31-2007, 09:37 AM
Im glad we're getting some vet votes :D

2-1 uppin 8)

Cats_Pajamas
05-31-2007, 11:58 AM
Flow: Annie
Punches: Ghost
Personals: Tie
Multies: Annie
Meta's: Ghost
Wordplay: Ghost
Compexity: Tie
Consistancy: Ghost
Opener: Ghost
Closer: Tie

Overall: Ghost

Seen better from both :?

Young_Ghost
05-31-2007, 12:16 PM
pfft... :roll:

aiight 3-2 bump

Hollamoney
05-31-2007, 12:50 PM
GHOSTFACE KILLA

'lookin for a win'? it'll be a 'Burden-ta-Find-It', cuz with your 'eyez, punchez Merge-N-ya-Blinded'
'step outta place', and like 'arranging garden plants' i'll 'put this Herb-in-Alignment'!/
good openr
couldnt even {be average} if I 'Curved-an-Assignment', so ya Hurt-to-See-Mine
the way i {move N Murk-Your-E-lines} like a 'Surge-in-the-Climate'!//
{B-Average} {Movin Mercury Lines}
Tiight bar this shit is classic!!!

'trying to hold on to this' you'll 'crash-N-burn' like im 'Touchin-the-Pilots-Hands', Punches-'Arrive-N-Land'
'they want me to rid RD of you', sayin {Run-N-Purge, Hurry!} like 'Rushin-to-Lie-at-Stands'!/

liked this bar good wordplay
to Destruction-this-Guy-is-Damned, 'come to your home' and your Head'll-go-POW!
cuz i bring {Lead to Locales} like 'Instruction-in-Diet-Plans'!//
{Runnin Purgery} {Led to Low Cals(calories)}

liked this bar good wordplay

like 'tricky thieves invading homes' i'll 'Break-Through-ya-Back', and 'stomp' till im 'Makin-you-Flat'
Annie's 'facin a monster', and 'taunting horned animals' is the only way you have {Capable} Raps!/

aiight this line seems like filler to me
my 'bars' are 'Inescapable-Traps' so theres no chance Annie Beat'em-at-All
so fatal blows {Beasting-ya-Jaws} like 'insect Facial-Attacks'!//
{Cape-a-Bull} {Bee Sting Ya Jaws}
aiight closer



ANNIE WILKES

Look Bitch! Despite Your Ranking, This Is A Fashion Show With Blind Judges ' Your Style Is Irrelevant'
This Other-Wordly Apparition Couldn't Touch Me, If I Had A Visit From Somethin' Heaven-Sent!!
Cuz When I Slice, N Singapore Inuit Hurtz.. Like An Eskimo That'z Injured, And Out Of His Element!!
{Sink-A-Pore-In-You, It-Hurtz}
good opener

His Rhymes'll-Get-Sneered.. One Punch, Lightz Out! S'Like "Throwing Away Paintin' Materialz..."..His-Easel-Get-Cleared!!
Fuck It, Detail Carz N "Take It To Wax!" Bitch, "Watch Your Vinyl-Get-Smeared!"
Your Lyricz Are Like Marinez Who Golf, "Sub, Par!" So Like "An Agonizing Pregnancy" Watch Bitch's-Spinal-Get-Pierced
{Eyes'll Get Cleared}
lol nice bar here
Young_Ghost's Signature wrote:

...I'm bout ta take it back to dayz when ppl on this site had skillz...


+[RD Power Rankings #1]+
Net Record: +[25 Winz] [16 Ko'z] [1 Loss]+

-Shoalin
ASP
SiiNiDE
Leto
KMC
Young Ghost - #1 Crew



#1?! Nah, You're The Lesser-Man, With Desperate-Plans! Sorry I'm Mimicking A Kangaroo Rat... But I'll "Leave Young Buried In The Desert Sand"
Skillz?! Never-Man, Ur Just A Desperate-Dan, With "Punchez Written At Jackson's Abode".... They Certainly "NEVER, LAND"
U Not Clever-Man! Who You Better-Than? You Can't Measure Up To This Vet!! You're Short A Few Points Like Severed Hands!!

like the neverland line...pretty decent closer


Punches- Young Ghost
Personal-Tie
Wordplay-Tie
Multi-Young Ghost
metaphor-Tie
Opener- Young Ghost
Closer- Anesthetic
Creativity-Tie
Enjoyment-Tie

Overall- This was a close battle guys, Its not hard to see why you are both considered vets on this site.....overall Ghost's verses were just a couple of degrees hotter

My vote-Young Ghost

Anesthetic
05-31-2007, 12:54 PM
....^^.....?

phatfarm411
05-31-2007, 03:04 PM
^i think y'all shoulda put dat only members dat are eligible to battle in RD3 can vote, den you woulda known dat da votes would be straight

Anesthetic
05-31-2007, 03:32 PM
You have to have 300 posts to vote in here, anywayz.

Young_Ghost
06-01-2007, 09:43 AM
/\/\ ... :?

still 3-2 uppin

makewayforenkay
06-02-2007, 10:48 AM
truely sick battle

flow-annie
multi's-tie
punches-ghost barely edged it out
personals-tie
metas-annie had really sick metas hard to beat
wordplay-ghost
enjoyment-ghost

it was close but overall it was ghost, he came harder on the punches which was really the decider

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-02-2007, 03:40 PM
Punches- Young Ghost
Personal- Tie
Wordplay- Tie
Multi- Annie
Metas- Tie
Opener- Young Ghost
Closer- Annie
Creativity- Tie
Enjoyment- Annie

Jesus - Close Battle - Def The Dopest I Seen In A While... O/A Annie Just Cut It On The Catz...

4-3

instinx
06-04-2007, 12:36 AM
Flow: easily ghost
Punches: ghost.. hit harder.. ghosts had more.. EXCEPT you do not give a person a category just cuz he had more than the other guy.. its the quality of the punches (sum peepz don know.. GET EDUCATED KIDZ)
Personals: Annie.. correct me if im wrong but i see barely any from ghost.. im not looking at his sig right now or anything that would suggest a personal but they all look like punches..including the persons name is barely a personal.. theres nothing personal about it.. its someones title.. did he have sex with a herb/mercury or something? if that were the case i would apologize for my ignorance
Multies: Ghost easy.. he had more effective multies throughout
Meta's: Annie.. ghost was usin similies and annie only had a few and was takin advantage of metaz.. noone shudda given this cat to ghost****cats pajamas AHEM..
Complexity: Annie.. easy..
Consistancy: Tie..
Opener: Ghost.. easier flow.. better punch.. easier to understand
Closer: Ghost.. annie had a played concept with michael jackson..

Overall: Young Ghost took this.. annie came complex but it just threw the flow off too much

correct me if im wrong on the personalz thing.. votes the same tho

Hollamoney
06-04-2007, 11:12 AM
GHOSTFACE KILLA

'lookin for a win'? it'll be a 'Burden-ta-Find-It', cuz with your 'eyez, punchez Merge-N-ya-Blinded'
'step outta place', and like 'arranging garden plants' i'll 'put this Herb-in-Alignment'!/
good openr
couldnt even {be average} if I 'Curved-an-Assignment', so ya Hurt-to-See-Mine
the way i {move N Murk-Your-E-lines} like a 'Surge-in-the-Climate'!//
{B-Average} {Movin Mercury Lines}
Tiight bar this shit is classic!!!

'trying to hold on to this' you'll 'crash-N-burn' like im 'Touchin-the-Pilots-Hands', Punches-'Arrive-N-Land'
'they want me to rid RD of you', sayin {Run-N-Purge, Hurry!} like 'Rushin-to-Lie-at-Stands'!/

liked this bar good wordplay
to Destruction-this-Guy-is-Damned, 'come to your home' and your Head'll-go-POW!
cuz i bring {Lead to Locales} like 'Instruction-in-Diet-Plans'!//
{Runnin Purgery} {Led to Low Cals(calories)}

liked this bar good wordplay

like 'tricky thieves invading homes' i'll 'Break-Through-ya-Back', and 'stomp' till im 'Makin-you-Flat'
Annie's 'facin a monster', and 'taunting horned animals' is the only way you have {Capable} Raps!/

aiight this line seems like filler to me
my 'bars' are 'Inescapable-Traps' so theres no chance Annie Beat'em-at-All
so fatal blows {Beasting-ya-Jaws} like 'insect Facial-Attacks'!//
{Cape-a-Bull} {Bee Sting Ya Jaws}
aiight closer



ANNIE WILKES

Look Bitch! Despite Your Ranking, This Is A Fashion Show With Blind Judges ' Your Style Is Irrelevant'
This Other-Wordly Apparition Couldn't Touch Me, If I Had A Visit From Somethin' Heaven-Sent!!
Cuz When I Slice, N Singapore Inuit Hurtz.. Like An Eskimo That'z Injured, And Out Of His Element!!
{Sink-A-Pore-In-You, It-Hurtz}
good opener

His Rhymes'll-Get-Sneered.. One Punch, Lightz Out! S'Like "Throwing Away Paintin' Materialz..."..His-Easel-Get-Cleared!!
Fuck It, Detail Carz N "Take It To Wax!" Bitch, "Watch Your Vinyl-Get-Smeared!"
Your Lyricz Are Like Marinez Who Golf, "Sub, Par!" So Like "An Agonizing Pregnancy" Watch Bitch's-Spinal-Get-Pierced
{Eyes'll Get Cleared}
lol nice bar here
Young_Ghost's Signature wrote:

...I'm bout ta take it back to dayz when ppl on this site had skillz...


+[RD Power Rankings #1]+
Net Record: +[25 Winz] [16 Ko'z] [1 Loss]+

-Shoalin
ASP
SiiNiDE
Leto
KMC
Young Ghost - #1 Crew



#1?! Nah, You're The Lesser-Man, With Desperate-Plans! Sorry I'm Mimicking A Kangaroo Rat... But I'll "Leave Young Buried In The Desert Sand"
Skillz?! Never-Man, Ur Just A Desperate-Dan, With "Punchez Written At Jackson's Abode".... They Certainly "NEVER, LAND"
U Not Clever-Man! Who You Better-Than? You Can't Measure Up To This Vet!! You're Short A Few Points Like Severed Hands!!

like the neverland line...pretty decent closer


Punches- Young Ghost
Personal-Tie
Wordplay-Tie
Multi-Young Ghost
metaphor-Tie
Opener- Young Ghost
Closer- Anesthetic
Creativity-Tie
Enjoyment-Tie

Overall- This was a close battle guys, Its not hard to see why you are both considered vets on this site.....overall Ghost's verses were just a couple of degrees hotter

My vote-Young Ghost


what now bithces .......thought so...lol now count my vote

Young_Ghost
07-21-2007, 12:06 PM
Since this shoulda been closed... you are all hereby informed that this was a 5-3 win for me.

8)

congrat on becoming my current bitch annie!!!