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alfa-q
05-26-2007, 02:08 AM
4 Barz....


Check....

...yOuNg jU...
05-26-2007, 06:30 PM
chk... i'll drop right afta i drop on america

...yOuNg jU...
05-31-2007, 01:22 PM
Check…

Stand in Line, Take a Number, Grab a Seat, Wait-N-Sit-Calm…
‘Protect your Lips’ like ‘Lip-Balm’, Cuz I spit Grenades-N-Shit-Bombs…
Dudes say he Elevated… I don’t care if u Levitated, I’ll take {Alf Off The Air} like the “80’s-Sitcom”!!!!
{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ALF_(TV_series)}

Yezzzirrr…

Now I got ‘Fear Gaining Legal Work Experience’, it ‘Resides {Intern-ALI}…
So the ‘Life’s ready to Come outta this Pussy’ like ‘Late Stages of a Maternity’…
Certainly… I’m Quick to {Cap-A-Alfa} like ‘Running to The Fraternity’!!!!!
{Internally - http://www.ali.org/}
{Kappa-Alpha}

Run n Hide Bitch…

I’m ‘Looking for the Dick’ like ‘Sonograms During a Pregnancy’…
Cuz He’s Telling-Me, that he’ll leave Me Smelling-G…
So I’m Here to See, if ‘{Alpha-Bet} His life on it’ like this shit was a ‘Spelling-Bee’!!!
{Alphabet}

Didn’t think so…

Let it Sink in like Sediment… your shit is So-Damn-Repetitive…
Like Stadium Riots, you’ll Get Ya Dome-Shanked-With-Recklessness…
Cuz In Battle, I’m the equivalent of ‘Stopping {Ven-Trick-Calls} like ‘Halting Phone-Pranks-on-Venomous’!!!!!
{Ventricles}

Ouch…

{Ju Invictus} Unconquerable

alfa-q
06-01-2007, 03:37 AM
ayite il drop b4 i wirte jus to make this quick

its amazing-if-he-shows!, play'n-wit-heat-tho,..but even then "Alf'll never be seen or heard of again" like the late 80's-tv-show..||


8) Q Quick to be defeatin~n~get~rid of vets! see this parrot repeating~wat~he~did?...
Coz people sayin "{JU NEAR DEATH}" the way "ALFA BEATING~ON~THE~KID"...{junior death}



....

Alfa'l "Expose Your Floors"{Flaws} lyk "Selling Your Troubled~Homes"...
Comin thru wid ya struggled~groans Coz when i Spit "{Ju Will Be Hidden 4rm Sight}" like SMUGGLED~STONES!!!...{jewel be hidden from sight}

....
Ima invoke this clown~to~think! an {"JU SEE/Juicy" PUNCHES} lyk BARTENDERS ADDING FRUITY ROUNDS~TO~DRINK...
You'll neva be a step ahead of me!! Coz il leave Ju TIED TO BASINS so dont try it Son YOUR "BOUND TO SINK"!!!!!

....Str8 Punch.....

Aint no1 knows when this animal~stops coz lyk "Prachute Toopers Afraid of Heights" JU WILL NEVER HANDLE~MY~DROPS...
Son's getn More "QUICKSHOTS" than SONY CAMERA SHOPS!! IL PUT U ON REPEAT but JU STILL COULDNT {DOUBLE THESE/D's} even REPIN PAMELA'S TOPS!!!

alfa-q
06-04-2007, 04:25 AM
Vote Up

...yOuNg jU...
06-04-2007, 09:44 AM
:?

Bump...

1-0 alfa

alfa-q
06-04-2007, 11:36 PM
bump. bc ju-near n junior! how is it forcd?

Shoalin
06-05-2007, 06:56 AM
Punches: Alfa
Flow: Julian
Personals: Tie
Multis: Hard Tie
Wordplay: Tie
VOTE: This Is a Clear Tie, JuJu Came With Sick Structure and Flow with Some realy nice punches Wrapped under that wordplay but alfa Came with Raw Power and a Nice Mix of Concepts.


2-1 Alfa'z Way

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-05-2007, 07:09 AM
Check…

Stand in Line, Take a Number, Grab a Seat, Wait-N-Sit-Calm…
‘Protect your Lips’ like ‘Lip-Balm’, Cuz I spit Grenades-N-Shit-Bombs…
Dudes say he Elevated… I don’t care if u Levitated, I’ll take {Alf Off The Air} like the “80’s-Sitcom”!!!!

{Lol... This one backfired... Its played out already}

Now I got ‘Fear Gaining Legal Work Experience’, it ‘Resides {Intern-ALI}…
So the ‘Life’s ready to Come outta this Pussy’ like ‘Late Stages of a Maternity’…
Certainly… I’m Quick to {Cap-A-Alfa} like ‘Running to The Fraternity’!!!!!

{Decent Line - Def Not The Best I Seen From You}

I’m ‘Looking for the Dick’ like ‘Sonograms During a Pregnancy’…
Cuz He’s Telling-Me, that he’ll leave Me Smelling-G…
So I’m Here to See, if ‘{Alpha-Bet} His life on it’ like this shit was a ‘Spelling-Bee’!!!

{Ok Wordplay Here But Most Seemed Forced And Fillers Aint Ya Thing Ju... WTF Is Goin On??}

Let it Sink in like Sediment… your shit is So-Damn-Repetitive…
Like Stadium Riots, you’ll Get Ya Dome-Shanked-With-Recklessness…
Cuz In Battle, I’m the equivalent of ‘Stopping {Ven-Trick-Calls} like ‘Halting Phone-Pranks-on-Venomous’!!!!!

{LOL Nice Closer - Yes Someone Understands The Punch... Nice Ish}




ayite il drop b4 i wirte jus to make this quick

its amazing-if-he-shows!, play'n-wit-heat-tho,..but even then "Alf'll never be seen or heard of again" like the late 80's-tv-show..||


{OUCH!! Could Be Considered Feeding - Maybe}

8) Q Quick to be defeatin~n~get~rid of vets! see this parrot repeating~wat~he~did?...
Coz people sayin "{JU NEAR DEATH}" the way "ALFA BEATING~ON~THE~KID"...{junior death}

{Lol Nice W/P Overall Decent Punch}

Alfa'l "Expose Your Floors"{Flaws} lyk "Selling Your Troubled~Homes"...
Comin thru wid ya struggled~groans Coz when i Spit "{Ju Will Be Hidden 4rm Sight}" like SMUGGLED~STONES!!!...{jewel be hidden from sight}

{Again OK W/P But Punch Is Not Hard Hitting - More Just W/P}

Ima invoke this clown~to~think! an {"JU SEE/Juicy" PUNCHES} lyk BARTENDERS ADDING FRUITY ROUNDS~TO~DRINK...
You'll neva be a step ahead of me!! Coz il leave Ju TIED TO BASINS so dont try it Son YOUR "BOUND TO SINK"!!!!!

{Ok Start- Decent Finish - But Nothing Special - That Ju W/P Is Wearing Out}

Aint no1 knows when this animal~stops coz lyk "Prachute Toopers Afraid of Heights" JU WILL NEVER HANDLE~MY~DROPS...
Son's getn More "QUICKSHOTS" than SONY CAMERA SHOPS!! IL PUT U ON REPEAT but JU STILL COULDNT {DOUBLE THESE/D's} even REPIN PAMELA'S TOPS!!!

{LOL Nice Closer - Solid - Much Better Than Your Previous Stuff - Work On Consistency}



Opener - Alfa - Even If It Was Kinda Feeding - Prac Killed Ju's Whole Verse
Flow - TIE - Both Had Solidish Flow
Multies - Ju - Seemed Forced IMO
Punches - Alfa - Ju Your Punches Were All Played Out
Wordplay - TIE - You Both Did Good In This Cat - But Alfa That Ju Shit Got Old Quick
Personals - Ju - Only Cause Of Superior N/P
CLoser - Alfa - Just Better IMO
Overall: Alfa Q

Thought Alfa Had The Better Punches And Ish Was Less Played Out... Ju? Whats Up Man - You Aight??

3-0 Close

:::1:::

alfa-q
06-05-2007, 08:19 AM
again bc im not american my accent doesnt make it sound like that :?

...yOuNg jU...
06-05-2007, 10:43 AM
ok... wait... 3-1 Alfa...

first of all.. you all should know better.. i JUST came back, this kid alfa is brand new to me, i never heard of him... soooo, all the name plays, especially the Alf one are NOT played to me because i haven't been here to see them being used on him...

it's just like when people use the Ju-Jew play on me... if they are new and never heard of me, they gunna think it's original even though a lot of people used it before...

so on that topic.. the Ju-See (Juicy) has been used, i don't remember who but i can look it up if ya want...

the Jewels was used by SiNiS previously in one of our many battles...


N wordplay?... Tie???... his was super basic... Ju-Near???? Ju-Will... Ju-See and Double D's??? compared to Ventricles alone is way more complex than all of his w/p... it's not quantity, it's quality...

on top he fed.. i didn't say shit though...

and mulries???... I had AT LEAST 3 per bar... 4 on one... he only had 2 per bar... and they were ok...

w/e... BUMP for some REAL voters

makewayforenkay
06-05-2007, 11:39 AM
flow-Ju
multi's-Ju he got pretty complex with it
punches-ab-his were alot harder hittin
personals-tie
wordplay-ju (like he said quality over quantity)
metas-ab-less played than ju's
enjoyment-ju

my vote goes to ju

...yOuNg jU...
06-05-2007, 06:54 PM
Space it the way I did? How else can I possibly space it? Lmao

...yOuNg jU...
06-05-2007, 10:06 PM
????? so whats wordplay to you then???

alfa-q
06-06-2007, 12:59 AM
uhhhuuummmm

1st off....

The point of getting votes is to see what other people think about your drops...so wether or not you didnt think your stuff was played doesnt really make any phucking difference, if its played to the person voting then its played aint no exceptions if you think your a vet or not.

2ndly

http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=33773&highlight=
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=32158&highlight=&sid=8debdd918f7436d102528adf91b3a139
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=28320&highlight=
http://www.rapdogs.com/message-board-forum/viewtopic.php?t=28103&highlight=

^^ Click em

Your Battles with Sinis PLEASE LOOK 4 THE BAT THAT HE USED JU-WILL{JEWEL} WORDPLAY coz i think my monitor is broken i just cant seem to find it :lol: 8)

3rdly

STOP PHUCKING TRYNA SWAY VOTES

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-06-2007, 03:02 AM
Intern-ALI - Come outta this Pussy - ‘Late Stages of a Maternity’…
‘Looking for the Dick’ - ‘Sonograms During a Pregnancy’…
Alpha-Bet - ‘Spelling-Bee’!!!

^ Played - Unless You Flip Them Better - It Doesnt Matter If Its W/P Or N/P - The Flips Are Old In Any Case - Seen Them Done Better Too...

Ultimatly Your Shit Was Preschool Compared To Your Normal Stuff And Because Of The Apparent Lack Of Effort - Is Why I Voted Alfa - Because Although He Had BASIC W/P & N/P - His Flips Were Fresh - Besides The N/P - Which I Stated... If You Dont Like My Opinion - Go Fuck Yourself...



FOR BELOW POST TO AVOID FREEPOST

Are You Still Bitching - In YOUR Opinion it wasn't played
In MY Opinion It Was - See The Difference - YOU AINT VOTING

...yOuNg jU...
06-06-2007, 05:58 AM
Inter-ALI... PLayed???


looking for the dick like sonograms during a pregnancy?? .. i neva seen it flipped like that...

and, come outta this pussy like late stages of maternity, the come outta this pussy might be played, but never flipped like late stages of maternity

and the Alpha-Bet, is attached to {Alpha-Bet His Life on it}... like a Spelling Bee... i'm saying your life depends on the alphabet like a Spelling Bee contest... :?

now that shit can't possibly of have been done before...


anyways... regarding SiNiS... I stand corrected, he used Ju-L's (Jewels)... i just knew i saw the Jewels flipped on me before...


but the Ju-See, i will definately find the link for that...

ohh yeah.. and Ju-Near was way forced...

alfa-q
06-06-2007, 06:53 AM
Inter-ALI... PLayed???


anyways... regarding SiNiS... I stand corrected, he used Ju-L's (Jewels)... i just knew i saw the Jewels flipped on me before...


but the Ju-See, i will definately find the link for that...

ohh yeah.. and Ju-Near was way forced...


Still Looking For That Sinis Line Please Post it coz i cant see it in your battles :lol:

hmmm why the f..uck are you commenting on my verse anyway dude why dont you change your nick n come back and vote for yourself you might aswell the way you tryn to sway votes.....

you dont hear me sayn that the alphabet play has been flipped by almost every1 hell maybe even game shark too :shock:

or

that almost your whole verse was bellow par and just a mess of fillers :shock:


anyway do you want me to vote for you? il drop a vote if you that desperate jus pm me :wink:


peace

~2~

phatfarm411
06-06-2007, 07:29 AM
multis: Ju.. i thought his multis flowed better, and it didnt seem like he was trying as hard to do em.. they almost look'd natural
metas: tie.. both werent as good as ive seen.. but i think matched up pretty evenly
similes: Ju.. again seemed more natural, jus flowed easier
punchlines: Ju.. he had more lines dat made me laugh.. and he really brought you into his drop
nameplay: tie.. i thought both came evenly on nameplay.. i saw quite a bit of it too.. which normally isnt the case
wordplay: Alfa.. he seemed more confortable in dis field.. Ju executed this well.. but i think alfa jus came a lil bit stronger
enjoyment: Ju.. jus cuz he had some comedy in his drop, which is wat i always look for.. i hate a dull boring battle
opener: Ju.. he jus came harder on dis.. da punchline wit da shittin bombs was funny
closer: Alfa.. he had a good personal and a funny punchline in his closer.. da pamela part is wat took it for me
personals: Ju.. i jus felt dat he incorperated alfa into his drops alot.. i saw reference alot more often
structure: Ju.. he played wit his style and didnt make it look to plain

overall: Ju.. i thought this was more of a one sided battle.. both had good verses, jus Ju came a lil harder

alfa-q
06-11-2007, 11:59 PM
bump 3-3

Red Tha Baron
06-14-2007, 07:29 PM
8) Q Quick to be defeatin~n~get~rid of vets! see this parrot repeating~wat~he~did?...
Coz people sayin "{JU NEAR DEATH}" the way "ALFA BEATING~ON~THE~KID"...{junior death}
i like how you use set ups as punches, or they are aggressive..wordplay is alittle forced, i understand you have a different accent, but still..anyway, good multies, and nice punch


....

Alfa'l "Expose Your Floors"{Flaws} lyk "Selling Your Troubled~Homes"...
Comin thru wid ya struggled~groans Coz when i Spit "{Ju Will Be Hidden 4rm Sight}" like SMUGGLED~STONES!!!...{jewel be hidden from sight}
wordplay with the floors/flaws is forced again, but a nice set up and punch..final punchline was good, decent flip of the jewel wordplay
....
Ima invoke this clown~to~think! an {"JU SEE/Juicy" PUNCHES} lyk BARTENDERS ADDING FRUITY ROUNDS~TO~DRINK...
You'll neva be a step ahead of me!! Coz il leave Ju TIED TO BASINS so dont try it Son YOUR "BOUND TO SINK"!!!!!
first was funny, i was feelin it..this set up wasnt aggressive, really jus silly soundin..but the overall punch was iight..decent multies..

Aint no1 knows when this animal~stops coz lyk "Prachute Toopers Afraid of Heights" JU WILL NEVER HANDLE~MY~DROPS...
Son's getn More "QUICKSHOTS" than SONY CAMERA SHOPS!! IL PUT U ON REPEAT but JU STILL COULDNT {DOUBLE THESE/D's} even REPIN PAMELA'S TOPS!!!
first line is iight..maybe people(Ju) thought u had no multies cuz you didnt mark all of them? (camera shops)..anyway, final punch was funny, wordplay was clean..the quickshots part was sorta played, but overall i was feelin this finisher

oddly enough Ju was lying when he said you only had 2 multies per bar? lol...
.................................................. .................................................. ......

Stand in Line, Take a Number, Grab a Seat, Wait-N-Sit-Calm…
‘Protect your Lips’ like ‘Lip-Balm’, Cuz I spit Grenades-N-Shit-Bombs…
Dudes say he Elevated… I don’t care if u Levitated, I’ll take {Alf Off The Air} like the “80’s-Sitcom”!!!!
{http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ALF_(TV_series)}
iight shit, the protect ya lips thing was funny...now the nameplay has been done before but you flipped it with the "levitated/off the air" part..so its a good flip, nice punch if alittle played

Now I got ‘Fear Gaining Legal Work Experience’, it ‘Resides {Intern-ALI}…
So the ‘Life’s ready to Come outta this Pussy’ like ‘Late Stages of a Maternity’…
Certainly… I’m Quick to {Cap-A-Alfa} like ‘Running to The Fraternity’!!!!!
{Internally - http://www.ali.org/}
{Kappa-Alpha}
first line isnt played to me..smh @ the pussy line..pussy metaphors are FUCKING OLD NOW..i went over this wit antic, anway, its old. and the final punch..worded badly.. you will cap a alfa..thats like me sayin i will punch a Jeff..get me? grammar wise this is forced..cuz it should be said, "cap Alfa"..but then the wordplay dont work..so i aint really feelin this.

I’m ‘Looking for the Dick’ like ‘Sonograms During a Pregnancy’…
Cuz He’s Telling-Me, that he’ll leave Me Smelling-G…
So I’m Here to See, if ‘{Alpha-Bet} His life on it’ like this shit was a ‘Spelling-Bee’!!!
{Alphabet}
first line is homo and ALL the sexual double entredes is old as fuck......final punch is funny, good punch..decent bar

Let it Sink in like Sediment… your shit is So-Damn-Repetitive…
Like Stadium Riots, you’ll Get Ya Dome-Shanked-With-Recklessness…
Cuz In Battle, I’m the equivalent of ‘Stopping {Ven-Trick-Calls} like ‘Halting Phone-Pranks-on-Venomous’!!!!!
{Ventricles}
dome wordplay is gettin old now..final punch was dope tho. i was feelin it

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FlowTied
MultiesTied
MetasA
WordplayJ
PunchesA
PersonalsTied

MyVoteAlfa-Q, less played shit..some wordplay was forced but it was better to have alittle forced wordplay than played metas like the dick, pussy, dome shit...personal wise..i was leanin for alfa, cus one of Ju's was played and one personal was forced..but none of Alfa's personals were real hard hitting, so i just decided it was a tie. Alfa got punches, was a close call but i was feelin his clever set ups..close battle.

4-3 Alfa

ReFleXiOn
06-16-2007, 09:53 PM
cudda sworn i voted on this...guess not...


Young Ju:

Stand in Line, Take a Number, Grab a Seat, Wait-N-Sit-Calm…
‘Protect your Lips’ like ‘Lip-Balm’, Cuz I spit Grenades-N-Shit-Bombs…
Dudes say he Elevated… I don’t care if u Levitated, I’ll take {Alf Off The Air} like the “80’s-Sitcom”!!!!
^pretty good opener...

Yezzzirrr…

Now I got ‘Fear Gaining Legal Work Experience’, it ‘Resides {Intern-ALI}…
So the ‘Life’s ready to Come outta this Pussy’ like ‘Late Stages of a Maternity’…
Certainly… I’m Quick to {Cap-A-Alfa} like ‘Running to The Fraternity’!!!!!
{Internally - http://www.ali.org/}
{Kappa-Alpha}
^i was def feeling this one...i've never seen it b4 personally and i've been on multiple sites since 02...

Run n Hide Bitch…

I’m ‘Looking for the Dick’ like ‘Sonograms During a Pregnancy’…
Cuz He’s Telling-Me, that he’ll leave Me Smelling-G…
So I’m Here to See, if ‘{Alpha-Bet} His life on it’ like this shit was a ‘Spelling-Bee’!!!
{Alphabet}
^creatively flipped but...still a played concept...however creatively exectuted as I said hence u still get my cudoes...

Didn’t think so…

Let it Sink in like Sediment… your shit is So-Damn-Repetitive…
Like Stadium Riots, you’ll Get Ya Dome-Shanked-With-Recklessness…
Cuz In Battle, I’m the equivalent of ‘Stopping {Ven-Trick-Calls} like ‘Halting Phone-Pranks-on-Venomous’!!!!!
{Ventricles}
^lol, pretty dope, I liked this one, kinda made me chuckle...

Overall ur verse was consistant and effective with a slight played concept which ended up being flipped well regardless...nice drop...

Alfa-q:

Q Quick to be defeatin~n~get~rid of vets! see this parrot repeating~wat~he~did?...
Coz people sayin "{JU NEAR DEATH}" the way "ALFA BEATING~ON~THE~KID"...{junior death}
^lol, pretty good, ju near is a stretch, unless u sayin' it mad niggerish like, jyu-nyaar haha...


Alfa'l "Expose Your Floors"{Flaws} lyk "Selling Your Troubled~Homes"...
Comin thru wid ya struggled~groans Coz when i Spit "{Ju Will Be Hidden 4rm Sight}" like SMUGGLED~STONES!!!...{jewel be hidden from sight}
^excessively forced wordplay not to mention flaws and floors is played out...everything else was pretty straight though...

Ima invoke this clown~to~think! an {"JU SEE/Juicy" PUNCHES} lyk BARTENDERS ADDING FRUITY ROUNDS~TO~DRINK...
You'll neva be a step ahead of me!! Coz il leave Ju TIED TO BASINS so dont try it Son YOUR "BOUND TO SINK"!!!!!
ouch, i thought this was ur most effective so far for some reason...first part had humor second part sealed the deal, i unno, this one just appeals to me most so far...

Aint no1 knows when this animal~stops coz lyk "Prachute Toopers Afraid of Heights" JU WILL NEVER HANDLE~MY~DROPS...
Son's getn More "QUICKSHOTS" than SONY CAMERA SHOPS!! IL PUT U ON REPEAT but JU STILL COULDNT {DOUBLE THESE/D's} even REPIN PAMELA'S TOPS!!!
^pamela/double d's line is played, flipped aight but nothing miraculous...everything else in this part was raw though...


Overall this was a pretty close battle, I enjoyed both verses, both came correct but as it is one just appealed and came harder in my eyes this time around that being alfa-q...no i've clearly broken this down into evident perspective and despite the questions that may arise...yes, i've been around multiple sites since 02 so yes, i've seen practically everything...it's w/e though, count it or not this is the cold hard truth...

Vote: Alfa-Q

...yOuNg jU...
06-16-2007, 11:48 PM
good battle homie.. ur win