King MC Vs. Siinide Vs. Cats Pajamas ---D.O.E VOTES PLZ---

[...yOuNg jU...]

You already know what it is... just drop

[SiiNiDE]

Yo I wrote 2 for G and 2 for KMC, so I'mm take one out and write one for Cats.. Didn't know lil dude was in this :roll:

[[King_Mc]]

Good With Me. . .Check !!

[Cats_Pajamas]

Check

Pfft. Sii. :roll:

We'll see whos "little" after the battle :D

[Trigo]

Ok...

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[King_Mc]


Cats a weak competition! So this like 'obvious murder cases' theres no need to 'BACK-UP-WUT-THE-JURY-SEES`
You look whack,-son-from-ya-hurried-keys. . .
And anything to do with { Sii-culprit, ends } like WOMEN EMBARRASSED OF THEIR 'CATS' LACK-OF-MATURITY !!
(-{ `cycle pretends` }-) (Cats = Pussy)
:
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Vet? Siinide back and always looking for chances to make an easy beating like an AWOKEN-BEASTS-ETERNITY
K Block a doper-G?-ur-burnin-me. . .
Cuz its fair to say that my { prime ate Sii to ingestion } like MAIN FOCUSES TO COLLECT OVERSEAS-CURRENCY !!
(-{ Primate's Eye, to ingest yen }-)
:
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Theres no healing-or-curing-fractures!! All of the 'big talk'? IM NOW SEEING-HOW-WORRIES-BACK-URS
Im beating-down-wordy-statures. . .
He makin it to DOE? people would say: { Ghost? Umm...Bullshit!! } like CLEANING-OUT-DIRTY-PASTURES !!
(-{ Go stumble shit }-)
:
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A fell off, since then we aint-heard-ya-spits!! Like anal sex with syphilis you bet that the 'INVADING-BURNS-YA-SHIT'
He 'downsized' like trading-perfect-tits. . .
Cuz King get { in deep n dent Young } to 'hook up' on the 'board' like ADDS FROM ONLINE DATING-SERVICES !!
(-{ Independent, young, }-)


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SiiNiDE



K Block:its always good to have a "rival".


When the Feast Became Certain, we saw {Apparition Aware Of It's Demise} like 'Products Of Priests With Lame Sermons'!!
Cause I 'Roast' my nemesis! The Beast Remains 'Fervent'! And punches {Arab Out To Clean Up} Like Eastern Maid Servants!!!!!
{A Perish Unaware Of It's Demise} {Are About To Clean Up}

I'll put 'More Lead To Ya Teeth' than 'Invention Of Spoons'! And leave "Bigger Craters" in King than "Dimentions Of Moons"!!!!!
Are his Intentions To Lose? I'm not "Writing Poems On Foreheads"- But I got'a {Pen ta stick Ya face} so you really have {Pen-Chin For Wounds}!!!
{Pentastich Ya Face} {Pension For Wounds}

'Butchered'! G's in {'Offal' Condition} When I Land Tha Right Fist! It's well known 'Ghosts' only Fans Is 'Psycics'! But after 'Miss Cleo', who's Trusting Those???
Worse than 'Head Jobs With Herpes'- I'll smash with 'Disgusting Blows'! And you can call my lines "Egor" how they "Busting Ghost"!! :!: :!: :shock:
{Awful Condition}

Yeah man, no hate, Im sure we said some things we didnt mean. You are definitly a sick head. Mine was a keystyle too (Im not just saying that). I dont really need help on the word play. I think I know what I did wrong. I did too many small wordplays, instead of one really good one like you did. I do want a rematch maybe later in the month. Again, you are definitly one of the best on RD and Im looking foward to you becoming active again. Ill be in the lab for a while thinking up new wordplays and a refined style and Ill be back with avenge :lol: ..You can take that to the bank


:grab: ... Night, Night Cats...

Admittedly needs refining! So he's got Skill He Needs To Prove?? FUCK!! I'll Bore into cat Until Debris Protrudes!!!
And when this Drillin' Spree Concludes- like "AGood Car SalesMan" I'll "Show You {Cadillac Ability To Move}"!!!!!
{Cat'll Lack Ability To Move}


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Cats_Pajamas


*Static*

I Receive a trans-galactic call from admin informing me that three maladroit 'emcees' claim they can emerge victorious against my text. Disgusted, but entertained at the same time, I grab my extra terrestrial scrolls and begin my excursion
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My apparatus thrusts out of a black hole and I set my precocious transporter on a crash course for Earth
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My transporter emerges from the sky as chromatic cosmic particles, but then mystically materializes into a colossal interplanetary rocket which drops from the heavens and tears into Mother Earth
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I then proceed to levitate onto the roof of the Empire State building and throw my arms to the dead philosophers in heaven. Absorbing their knowledge through my palms and then deciphering their wisdom into rap euphemisms.
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I Assemble an Artificially Intelligent supercomputer and erect it in front of my robotic, and at the same time, divine, visage. RD appears on the computer and while closing my eyes I telepathically transport my mental scrolls into the mainframe of the computer and then into RD. The power supply surges, then my verse develops on the screen.
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CP Leave Ya ‘Breast Splintered and Snapped’...'Strike Him Out‘....Put 'Bats' Deep In His Chest...The Best? SMH…~Sii a Measly Vet Thinking He's Good~ like Cat Treatment Success
‘Blade Heals’ Incompetence…Savagely ‘Stuff Cures’ In Him…CP Thrust ‘Rights‘…But ‘His Punches land?'...Pfft…Watch As Sii Miss And Gets Mad~ like 'African' Rutgers Women

~Siamese Leave Vet Thinking He's Good~ ~~Watches Imus and Gets Mad~

Kings ‘Bars Tender’…MC Get 'Rounds’ to His ‘Mug' like He 'Sippin On Shots'...'Submerged' in Defeat...~King Sighs..Bodes with Loss~ like Restrictions on Yachts
Like ‘Felines Destroying Portraits of Puzzles‘…Cats Rip Ya 'Face' Into ‘Pieces‘..'Horns' of the Beast Revealed…'Reach For Me'‘?…~King Grab Spikes~ like Sudden Crustacean Increases

~King Size Boats With Laws~ ~King Crab Spikes~

Leave This 'Ghost Exposed'...and Have 'Velma' Proclaim My Victory like Jinkys Cats Took Yours...'Whip This Bitch!'...Only way ~G String Together Punches~ is ‘Kinky Ass Hookers‘
‘Homophobically Destroy You‘…Observe While I Son Your Gay Thinking…‘Eat This Thug‘... ‘Cannibalistically Gut and Serve G’ and Leave ~‘Youngs’ Sternum Smashed Also‘~ like Underage Drinking

~G-String To Get Their Punches~ ~Youngster Numb, Smashed Also~

‘Hurl Indian Weaponry’…Watch as my Spear Hits Ya Facial Features….En’Crypt’ Victorious Text…Wouldn’t Understand if Ya Had a ’Key!’…. Leave ~Ghost Leaking ‘Blood‘~ like Spirits of Racial Leaders
‘Lay MC in a Casket’ …I Don’t Mean ‘Queeer Doggy Style Sex‘ When I Put Wood Below Gay Men!!…Headed ‘South‘…Only Time I Hear ~King Stunned Ya, Make a Move~ is Hoods Relocating

~Ghostly King Blood~ ~Kingston Jamaica Move~
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Society implodes. Their collective cerebellums' are not yet ready to accept my futuristic flow or philosophy. I chuckle. Another spacecraft ascends, constructed by inhabitants from another dimension. I open an intergalactic rift in time and head back to the future.


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Uppin for votes D.O.E.... Oh, and do count those bars that diss on Ghost too... He was supposed to show... but didnt... give those bars credit as if he WAS here

[Trigo]

vote up

[aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE]

Lol thx for voting, but its only for DOE to vote...

We posted that in the other forum but didnt sayit in here... sry

-trigo

Sorry Bout That Dude... G'luck All

{aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE}

[Red Tha Baron]

AM is in DOE?

[Trigo]

[King_Mc]


Cats a weak competition! So this like 'obvious murder cases' theres no need to 'BACK-UP-WUT-THE-JURY-SEES`
You look whack,-son-from-ya-hurried-keys. . .
And anything to do with { Sii-culprit, ends } like WOMEN EMBARRASSED OF THEIR 'CATS' LACK-OF-MATURITY !!
(-{ `cycle pretends` }-) (Cats = Pussy)

nice wordplay, good punch, multies ok... hit pretty hard.. 9.5/10

Vet? Siinide back and always looking for chances to make an easy beating like an AWOKEN-BEASTS-ETERNITY
K Block a doper-G?-ur-burnin-me. . .
Cuz its fair to say that my { prime ate Sii to ingestion } like MAIN FOCUSES TO COLLECT OVERSEAS-CURRENCY !!
(-{ Primate's Eye, to ingest yen }-)

lol... good wordplay, even if fillers were kinda cheesy... punch is there 9.5/10

Theres no healing-or-curing-fractures!! All of the 'big talk'? IM NOW SEEING-HOW-WORRIES-BACK-URS
Im beating-down-wordy-statures. . .
He makin it to DOE? people would say: { Ghost? Umm...Bullshit!! } like CLEANING-OUT-DIRTY-PASTURES !!
(-{ Go stumble shit }-)

again, like the others, nice wordplay, good punch, nvery nice multies... 9.5/10

A fell off, since then we aint-heard-ya-spits!! Like anal sex with syphilis you bet that the 'INVADING-BURNS-YA-SHIT'
He 'downsized' like trading-perfect-tits. . .
Cuz King get { in deep n dent Young } to 'hook up' on the 'board' like ADDS FROM ONLINE DATING-SERVICES !!
(-{ Independent, young, }-)

I was feeling the fillers lines, multies and all, but the last punch-wordplay didnt do aynthig for me... 8.5/10

9.5+9.5+9.5+8.5 = 37/40
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SiiNiDE


Young_Ghost wrote:

K Block:its always good to have a "rival".



When the Feast Became Certain, we saw {Apparition Aware Of It's Demise} like 'Products Of Priests With Lame Sermons'!!
Cause I 'Roast' my nemesis! The Beast Remains 'Fervent'! And punches {Arab Out To Clean Up} Like Eastern Maid Servants!!!!!
{A Perish Unaware Of It's Demise} {Are About To Clean Up}

nice second punch, first one was ok... ok multies... 9/10

I'll put 'More Lead To Ya Teeth' than 'Invention Of Spoons'! And leave "Bigger Craters" in King than "Dimentions Of Moons"!!!!!
Are his Intentions To Lose? I'm not "Writing Poems On Foreheads"- But I got'a {Pen ta stick Ya face} so you really have {Pen-Chin For Wounds}!!!
{Pentastich Ya Face} {Pension For Wounds}

eheh, nice line, from the first word to the last word.. I liked it very much.. 10/10

'Butchered'! G's in {'Offal' Condition} When I Land Tha Right Fist! It's well known 'Ghosts' only Fans Is 'Psycics'! But after 'Miss Cleo', who's Trusting Those???
Worse than 'Head Jobs With Herpes'- I'll smash with 'Disgusting Blows'! And you can call my lines "Egor" how they "Busting Ghost"!!
{Awful Condition}

not bad... I liked it ... multies were nice, flow was good, punches hit alright.. I like that sometimes u keep it simple but still hit hard... 9.5/10

Cats_Pajamas wrote:
Yeah man, no hate, Im sure we said some things we didnt mean. You are definitly a sick head. Mine was a keystyle too (Im not just saying that). I dont really need help on the word play. I think I know what I did wrong. I did too many small wordplays, instead of one really good one like you did. I do want a rematch maybe later in the month. Again, you are definitly one of the best on RD and Im looking foward to you becoming active again. Ill be in the lab for a while thinking up new wordplays and a refined style and Ill be back with avenge ..You can take that to the bank



... Night, Night Cats...

Admittedly needs refining! So he's got Skill He Needs To Prove?? FUCK!! I'll Bore into cat Until Debris Protrudes!!!
And when this Drillin' Spree Concludes- like "AGood Car SalesMan" I'll "Show You {Cadillac Ability To Move}"!!!!!
{Cat'll Lack Ability To Move}

err... so so here... pretty simple wordplay... but I like how its easy to understand... the way u put it together, the structure n all... 9/10

9+10+9.5+9 = 37.5
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Cats_Pajamas

CP Leave Ya ‘Breast Splintered and Snapped’...'Strike Him Out‘....Put 'Bats' Deep In His Chest...The Best? SMH…~Sii a Measly Vet Thinking He's Good~ like Cat Treatment Success
‘Blade Heals’ Incompetence…Savagely ‘Stuff Cures’ In Him…CP Thrust ‘Rights‘…But ‘His Punches land?'...Pfft…Watch As Sii Miss And Gets Mad~ like 'African' Rutgers Women

mmm.... first line is really played... second is better but dosnt hit that hard...8.5/10

Kings ‘Bars Tender’…MC Get 'Rounds’ to His ‘Mug' like He 'Sippin On Shots'...'Submerged' in Defeat...~King Sighs..Bodes with Loss~ like Restrictions on Yachts
Like ‘Felines Destroying Portraits of Puzzles‘…Cats Rip Ya 'Face' Into ‘Pieces‘..'Horns' of the Beast Revealed…'Reach For Me'‘?…~King Grab Spikes~ like Sudden Crustacean Increases

I think its a good line, nice wordplay, could have structured it a lil better tho... 9.5/10

Leave This 'Ghost Exposed'...and Have 'Velma' Proclaim My Victory like Jinkys Cats Took Yours...'Whip This Bitch!'...Only way ~G String Together Punches~ is ‘Kinky Ass Hookers‘
‘Homophobically Destroy You‘…Observe While I Son Your Gay Thinking…‘Eat This Thug‘... ‘Cannibalistically Gut and Serve G’ and Leave ~‘Youngs’ Sternum Smashed Also‘~ like Underage Drinking

very nice... but i dont like the fact that these lines arent connected with a rime... 9/10

‘Hurl Indian Weaponry’…Watch as my Spear Hits Ya Facial Features….En’Crypt’ Victorious Text…Wouldn’t Understand if Ya Had a ’Key!’…. Leave ~Ghost Leaking ‘Blood‘~ like Spirits of Racial Leaders
‘Lay MC in a Casket’ …I Don’t Mean ‘Queeer Doggy Style Sex‘ When I Put Wood Below Gay Men!!…Headed ‘South‘…Only Time I Hear ~King Stunned Ya, Make a Move~ is Hoods Relocating

this line I did like... ur wordplay is evry nice, makes sense both ways... not as forced as most ppl but sometimes ur punches dont hit as hard as hoped... 9/10

What really took off from ur verse is that u didnt connect any of the lines together... thats why multies are really important... it hurt the overall valutation, cuz its like a penalty..

9+9+8.5+9.5 = 36


Well, overall I think ima go with Siinide... I like his wordplay, even if in this battle he was a bit under the weather, but even if he is he still hits hard... Remember, a line dosnt have to be to complicated or else it does the oppisite...

I would take all 3 of you, but there isnt enuff room... sry

Overall vote: Siinide

[[King_Mc]]

^ight thx Trigo. . .Bumpin'

[...yOuNg jU...]

OK.. WOW!... what a great battle... this was the best battle i've read for a WHILE... probably since Yo-Yo Vs. Peebz or Kaos or something crazy like that...

ok...

I can't do line by line for the lack of time... so imma do categories...


Complexity...
King.. this is a very important category for me

Punches...
Sii.. Damn kiddo...

Wordplay...
Cats.. wow.. Siamese line was disgusting... ridicoulous w/p

Multies...
Sii... He had inner Multies as well... otherwise it would of been a tie

Personals...
ummm... King MC had one bout Sii... Cats Had a Few... Sii had some personal shit in there as well... ummm... i guess i give it to Cats

Flow...
Sii... Because of inner multies and shorter bars...

Vocab..
Good on each verse.. 3-Way Tie


Damn this is tough... I will re-read the verses tonight and make my decision... sorry to leave you guys hanging, but you all are nice...

[SiiNiDE]

:shock: Don't wanna get this buried :grab:

[Cats_Pajamas]

1-0-0 Sii :?

[...yOuNg jU...]

hmmm.... ok.. i cant make a decision so imma do line by line...

[King_Mc]


Cats a weak competition! So this like 'obvious murder cases' theres no need to 'BACK-UP-WUT-THE-JURY-SEES`
You look whack,-son-from-ya-hurried-keys. . .
And anything to do with { Sii-culprit, ends } like WOMEN EMBARRASSED OF THEIR 'CATS' LACK-OF-MATURITY !!
(-{ `cycle pretends` }-) (Cats = Pussy)

First line... ok u start talking about Cats... then the punch u threw in there was weak, even though i see it was just a set up for the Sii-Culprit punch, you didn't have to force a punch into your set up... especially on your opening line...

Second line... Sii-Culprit, ends - FIRE W/P!... but now you are talking about Sii, when you started talking about cats... then the way you end it, you go back to Cats, that was a force, i was dissapointed... you should of just say pussy, it would of sounded harder, plus i would of understood the relation because a pussy is a young cat ye dig? so this line had mad potential, but it didn't work for me n it took away a lot from your verse.. the first line is always the most important for me...

Multies off on the last line

Vet? Siinide back and always looking for chances to make an easy beating like an AWOKEN-BEASTS-ETERNITY
K Block a doper-G?-ur-burnin-me. . .
Cuz its fair to say that my { prime ate Sii to ingestion } like MAIN FOCUSES TO COLLECT OVERSEAS-CURRENCY !!
(-{ Primate's Eye, to ingest yen }-)

First line... i like the "always looking for chances to make an easy win" - dope personal... but the way u linked it to the punch, it could of been flipped SOOOOOOOO much better.. i was like damn, dissapointed...

Second line... good wordplay... ok punch though... you remind me of Ru when he was first doing w/p... like iot was hot, but it wasn't really a hard punch...

multies off on all lines

Theres no healing-or-curing-fractures!! All of the 'big talk'? IM NOW SEEING-HOW-WORRIES-BACK-URS
Im beating-down-wordy-statures. . .
He makin it to DOE? people would say: { Ghost? Umm...Bullshit!! } like CLEANING-OUT-DIRTY-PASTURES !!
(-{ Go stumble shit }-)

10/10... Great set up.. good flow.. nice multies... good wrap up with nice w/p and a hard punch... this should of been your first bar

A fell off, since then we aint-heard-ya-spits!! Like anal sex with syphilis you bet that the 'INVADING-BURNS-YA-SHIT'
He 'downsized' like trading-perfect-tits. . .
Cuz King get { in deep n dent Young } to 'hook up' on the 'board' like ADDS FROM ONLINE DATING-SERVICES !!
(-{ Independent, young, }-)

First line... who is A?... i like the punch at the end of the line, nice set up.. multies.. mehhhh.. ok at best... i like the line in between, comedy...

Second Line.. Pure Lava... HARD PUNCH! Nice... should of been your second line


Overall... Ok your first 2 lines completely destroyed your verse... i lost so much interest in reading it.. the last two lines were hard as hell, but it was too late at that point... ummm.... it looks like your forcing your set ups too much, try to work on your set ups a little better... and clean your multies up some... with these two things, you'll be an intimidating opponent in no time...

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SiiNiDE

When the Feast Became Certain, we saw {Apparition Aware Of It's Demise} like 'Products Of Priests With Lame Sermons'!!
Cause I 'Roast' my nemesis! The Beast Remains 'Fervent'! And punches {Arab Out To Clean Up} Like Eastern Maid Servants!!!!!
{A Perish Unaware Of It's Demise} {Are About To Clean Up}

First line... nice w/p.. decent, still have my attention...

Second line... WoW.. nice!... I love the Multies.. clean as hell, makes it flow awesome when reading

Nice Opener.. Easy

I'll put 'More Lead To Ya Teeth' than 'Invention Of Spoons'! And leave "Bigger Craters" in King than "Dimentions Of Moons"!!!!!
Are his Intentions To Lose? I'm not "Writing Poems On Foreheads"- But I got'a {Pen ta stick Ya face} so you really have {Pen-Chin For Wounds}!!!
{Pentastich Ya Face} {Pension For Wounds}

First line.. too basic for me.. i didn't like it what so ever...

Second line...i don't know.. this bar didn't really work for me.. i stay away from using the same word twice in a bar... i would not of put this as a second bar at all... ehhhh.. multies on point though...

'Butchered'! G's in {'Offal' Condition} When I Land Tha Right Fist! It's well known 'Ghosts' only Fans Is 'Psycics'! But after 'Miss Cleo', who's Trusting Those???
Worse than 'Head Jobs With Herpes'- I'll smash with 'Disgusting Blows'! And you can call my lines "Egor" how they "Busting Ghost"!!
{Awful Condition}

First line... lmao, nice way to cram two bars in one line... don't act like i aint see that... Yup... this Should of been your second line... nice all around...

Admittedly needs refining! So he's got Skill He Needs To Prove?? FUCK!! I'll Bore into cat Until Debris Protrudes!!!
And when this Drillin' Spree Concludes- like "AGood Car SalesMan" I'll "Show You {Cadillac Ability To Move}"!!!!!
{Cat'll Lack Ability To Move}

Personal here.. ok, kinda forced but ok... HARD ending.. i liked it a lot...

Overall... not much i can say.. just pretty much clean and to the point all around... i stay away from the obvious w/p like the lead in your teeth.. i mean yeah it's nice, but not for text, that's some shit you'd do in a street battle... if that second bar was like your other 3 bars, you would of took this win easily... feel me?

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Cats_Pajamas

CP Leave Ya ‘Breast Splintered and Snapped’...'Strike Him Out‘....Put 'Bats' Deep In His Chest...The Best? SMH…~Sii a Measly Vet Thinking He's Good~ like Cat Treatment Success
‘Blade Heals’ Incompetence…Savagely ‘Stuff Cures’ In Him…CP Thrust ‘Rights‘…But ‘His Punches land?'...Pfft…Watch As Sii Miss And Gets Mad~ like 'African' Rutgers Women

First line.. i neva saw u battle before... i liked it a lot.. i like ur style... great W/P.. Great punch

Second line... good, good.. i would of put the second line first, and wraped it up with the harder punch on the first line.. but this is the hardest bar of the battle so far...

Kinda stretched bars, but i tend to do that sometimes... the only thing i woul critique, is that u put 2 bars in here... if you are gunna stretch your bars, DO NOT change your rhyming scheme... Deep in his chest/ treatment success.. then u switch to... Savagely stuff cures in him/ african rutgers woman... i mean thats not good.. but hard bar though.. i like ur w/p pretty clean here

Kings ‘Bars Tender’…MC Get 'Rounds’ to His ‘Mug' like He 'Sippin On Shots'...'Submerged' in Defeat...~King Sighs..Bodes with Loss~ like Restrictions on Yachts
Like ‘Felines Destroying Portraits of Puzzles‘…Cats Rip Ya 'Face' Into ‘Pieces‘..'Horns' of the Beast Revealed…'Reach For Me'‘?…~King Grab Spikes~ like Sudden Crustacean Increases

First line.. NICE. W/P again... ok

Second line.. W/P Forced... again chenged the rhyming scheme... not good.. sould of ended with first line, definately...

Leave This 'Ghost Exposed'...and Have 'Velma' Proclaim My Victory like Jinkys Cats Took Yours...'Whip This Bitch!'...Only way ~G String Together Punches~ is ‘Kinky Ass Hookers‘
‘Homophobically Destroy You‘…Observe While I Son Your Gay Thinking…‘Eat This Thug‘... ‘Cannibalistically Gut and Serve G’ and Leave ~‘Youngs’ Sternum Smashed Also‘~ like Underage Drinking

Nice BAr.. hard on both lines... rhyming scheme changed again and it's taking away from your verse and multies and flow... but you got good material.. it's a shame

‘Hurl Indian Weaponry’…Watch as my Spear Hits Ya Facial Features….En’Crypt’ Victorious Text…Wouldn’t Understand if Ya Had a ’Key!’…. Leave ~Ghost Leaking ‘Blood‘~ like Spirits of Racial Leaders
‘Lay MC in a Casket’ …I Don’t Mean ‘Queeer Doggy Style Sex‘ When I Put Wood Below Gay Men!!…Headed ‘South‘…Only Time I Hear ~King Stunned Ya, Make a Move~ is Hoods Relocating

Nice hard bars, but the rhyming scheme... hard bars but it's like your taking the easy way out...

Overall... Stop changing your rhyming scheme... shorten up your bars... maybe play with the set up... for example...

CP Leave Ya ‘Breast Splintered and Snapped’... Smashed-Eating-His-Flesh...
'Strike Him Out‘....Put 'Bats' Deep In His Chest...
The Best? SMH…~Sii a Measly Vet Thinking He's Good~ like Cat Treatment Success

^^^ Shorter bar... it's not stretched.. added a multie... set up for the punch.. flow is better and i didn't change my rhyming scheme...



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OK.. my vote goes to Sii... Cats and King.. you guys are good.. really good... but just work on those things i pointed out... for now i give it to sii because he doest need much work.. his style is good money...

Vote.. Siii

[Cats_Pajamas]

Thanks Ju, I'll Stop Doing that, and shorten up my bars 8)

Appreciate the advice, and thanks for the breakdown :D

2-0-0 Sii

[SiiNiDE]

where's DOE? :shock:

[SiNiS]

I read the battle..

Loved Cats intro's btw.. I thought all the verses were ill.. but once i added it all together i concluded Siinide Won!

Vote: Sii


Great Job and Props to all you emcee's

-2-

[...yOuNg jU...]

that's 3 out of 5

Sii, please proceed to the DOE crew forum for your induction ceremony...

Cats & King.. you both are dope emcees.. Sii just came with it this time...

battle closed!