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[King_Mc]
06-04-2007, 06:46 PM
3 Barz

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Due In 25 Min

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-04-2007, 06:59 PM
Due In 25 Mins? Ok Fuckhead...

[King_Mc]
06-04-2007, 07:01 PM
LoL yea, 25 min :roll: and stop with the name calling, its getting rather childish

[King_Mc]
06-04-2007, 07:24 PM
LMAO log off?

Due In 25 Mins

sad :(

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-05-2007, 01:36 AM
Yeah I Never Logged Off Dick... I Was Waiting For You To Drop - Deaded Your Own Deadline? Pfft... Key Done Hours Ago...

{For Starters}

We All Know "Kings'll Come And Go"... Like "Boy Band Articles" - Cuz King Just "Fade Around The Oh Zone"... Like "Atmospheric Particles"

:lol:

{But Seriously}

Ill With Text? Bla! You A Vet? HA! I "Smash On Kings"... Like "Press Indents Are" - Expecting Wins? Nah! Cuz Im "Versus Garbage"... Like "Fighting Trash Collectors"
Simply Martyr N Kings'll Fall Far! He "Known To Fake With Text"... Like "Forging Passports" - Aiming Sick? HA! "Punches Like Arcade Sites"... With "No Hits From Gamers"

:shock:

You Talkin Bitch? What? Cant Hear Ya Shit! "King Mumbles Audibles"... "Worse Than BC Is" King? Naw He Fakin It! Cuz "Kings'll Come And Go"... Like "Royal Executions Did"
Im Takin This! You Awake Now Bitch? Our "Skill Couldn't Match Up"... If You "Were A Synonym Kid" - Im Breakin His! Cuz "King'll Just Get Tuned Out"... Like "AM Signals Is"

:shock: :shock:

{Whats That Bitch?}

Picture This - King's "Developed Into Nothin"... Like "Camera Lens Caps Still On" - Cuz After This, "King'll Just Roll Out"... Like "Beheaded Victims"

[King_Mc]
06-05-2007, 11:26 AM
^LMAO

yea, your done :)

im at school, will drop when i get home. and why would u wait on my drop? ur callout = u drop first, dumbass :roll:

[King_Mc]
06-05-2007, 02:04 PM
since your 'bars' are stretched to shit. . .



And Yes, This Will Be My Third Time Beating You. . .


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My sloppy seconds? witness 'fall-of-rosters'........
Like in 'poor prescription reactions' it'd be best if he called-a-doctor. . .
Ur crew all-imposters.......
Match K? thats like 'elderly getting jobs', cuz this dudes 'off-his-rocker' !!
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AN? like 'police tactics' i treat-em-with-pumped-gas......
he get beat-n-will-dart-fast! i 'use his body to kill' and give a piece-of-his-heart-back
im beating-this-'smart'-fast.....
Cuz after this i send this dude 'back to the drawing board' like 'teaching-an-art-class' !!
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Like 'infant assaults' i pin the baby-with-the-lead.......
this like 'murderous rapists' cuz my punches just 'bang-em,-then-he-dead'
Faggot! you dont prey-beyond-the-bed.......
A real life battler? nah!! like this battle you can see him 'hanging-by-a-thread' !!
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[King_Mc]
06-05-2007, 02:47 PM
Good Battle Night, Im Done Beefin Wit You.

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-05-2007, 03:14 PM
Likewise - Peace...

Cats_Pajamas
06-05-2007, 04:35 PM
Americaz Nightmare


We All Know "Kings'll Come And Go"... Like "Boy Band Articles" - Cuz King Just "Fade Around The Oh Zone"... Like "Atmospheric Particles"
Picture This - King's "Developed Into Nothin"... Like "Camera Lens Caps Still On" - Cuz After This, "King'll Just Roll Out"... Like "Beheaded Victims"

First line, was allright, the boy band concept was fresh, you coulda pulled it off better, and the atmospheric particles was nice, the first part was a little iffy, because you develop after you take the picture, you shoulda said something about a flourescently lit dark room or something like that.........Overall: 3/5

Ill With Text? Bla! You A Vet? HA! I "Smash On Kings"... Like "Press Indents Are" - Expecting Wins? Nah! Cuz Im "Versus Garbage"... Like "Fighting Trash Collectors"
Simply Martyr N Kings'll Fall Far! He "Known To Fake With Text"... Like "Forging Passports" - Aiming Sick? HA! "Punches Like Arcade Sites"... With "No Hits From Gamers"

First part was gey, but the second was a nice twist, i liked it. Nice, I liked this whole second part, it was very clean....3.5/5


You Talkin Bitch? What? Cant Hear Ya Shit! "King Mumbles Audibles"... "Worse Than BC Is" King? Naw He Fakin It! Cuz "Kings'll Come And Go"... Like "Royal Executions Did"
Im Takin This! You Awake Now Bitch? Our "Skill Couldn't Match Up"... If You "Were A Synonym Kid" - Im Breakin His! Cuz "King'll Just Get Tuned Out"... Like "AM Signals Is"

I didnt like the first part at all, it was too cluttered. The second part was better. I liked the AM signals, that was fresh, never heard that before............3/5

Total: 9.5/15


King MC


My sloppy seconds? witness 'fall-of-rosters'........
Like in 'poor prescription reactions' it'd be best if he called-a-doctor. . .
Ur crew all-imposters.......
Match K? thats like 'elderly getting jobs', cuz this dudes 'off-his-rocker' !!

The first line I wasnt feeling, the call a doctor was played, but I liked the second part alot, never seen that used like that before lol....... 2.5/5[/b

AN? like 'police tactics' i treat-em-with-pumped-gas......
he get beat-n-will-dart-fast! i 'use his body to kill' and give a piece-of-his-heart-back
im beating-this-'smart'-fast.....
Cuz after this i send this dude 'back to the drawing board' like 'teaching-an-art-class' !!

[b]Ehh, the first part was allright, the multies were nice, I wasnt feeling the punch too much. The second line was stronger, nice punch, clean, I liked it.........3/5

Like 'infant assaults' i pin the baby-with-the-lead.......
this like 'murderous rapists' cuz my punches just 'bang-em,-then-he-dead'
Faggot! you dont prey-beyond-the-bed.......
A real life battler? nah!! like this battle you can see him 'hanging-by-a-thread' !!

LOL....Best line out of the bunch, the baby line was ight, but the rapist line had me rotfl. :lol: The second line was also nice, too, again, never heard that used before. But it coulda been pulled off better. Nice concept..........3.5/5

9/15


Flow: Am
Multies: King
Punches: Am
Personals: King
Wordplay: Tie
Metaz: Am
Opener: Am
Closer: King
Enjoyment: Am

Overall: Americaz Nightmare


Nice battle, you both brought a nice drop, but I felt Am edged it a little bit

aMERiKaZ NiGHTMaRE
06-05-2007, 05:00 PM
1-0...

[King_Mc]
06-05-2007, 05:15 PM
:shock: :? hmm..... ok then.................................

0-1

MC Fresh2Def
06-05-2007, 05:44 PM
flow.. KMC (a lot smoother IMO)
multies... KMC
punches... TIE
wordplay... AN
creativity... TIE
enjoyment... AN
structure... KMC

Overall: [King_Mc]

SiiNiDE
06-05-2007, 05:55 PM
flow... KMC Most of americaz didn't seem to fit too well together..
multies... KMC Does this need explaining?
punches... KMC like 'elderly getting jobs', cuz this dudes 'off-his-rocker' !!
wordplay... None Correct me if I'm wrong? I don't wanna go back and look, lol.
creativity... Tie Both had some good concepts..
enjoyment... KMC Flowed better and easier to read
structure... KMC Americaz was all over the place

Best lines:

KMC
My sloppy seconds? witness 'fall-of-rosters'........
Like in 'poor prescription reactions' it'd be best if he called-a-doctor. . .
Ur crew all-imposters.......
Match K? thats like 'elderly getting jobs', cuz this dudes 'off-his-rocker' !!

A.N.
You Talkin Bitch? What? Cant Hear Ya Shit! "King Mumbles Audibles"... "Worse Than BC Is" King? Naw He Fakin It! Cuz "Kings'll Come And Go"... Like "Royal Executions Did"
Im Takin This! You Awake Now Bitch? Our "Skill Couldn't Match Up"... If You "Were A Synonym Kid" - Im Breakin His! Cuz "King'll Just Get Tuned Out"... Like "AM Signals Is"

King's best bar heavily outweighed Americaz. Americaz used "Kings will come and go" twice, which really buts a dent in your verse. Makes it seem really forced.

O/A: KMC.. I didn't expect it to be as one sided as I see it... If you want break downs, just pm me.

Cats_Pajamas
06-05-2007, 06:29 PM
:?

[King_Mc]
06-05-2007, 06:40 PM
^y u posting? u voted........thx........go vote sumwhere else now :D

LYRICS
06-06-2007, 01:55 AM
this like 'murderous rapists' cuz my punches just 'bang-em,-then-he-dead' rofl
flow kmc
multis kmc
punches kmc
wordplay tie
metas kmc
complexity am
creativity am
enjoyment kmc
originality both really original but am cas of his style of kinda medieval
overall king mc his was alot more easier to understand yet still as affective but really good battle

alfa-q
06-06-2007, 03:40 AM
ayite

Flow - A N

Multi - King

Punchez - King

Personals - A N

Wordplay A N

Metas King

Overal

Dope Battle but ima go with kats n call it tie.

peace

[King_Mc]
06-06-2007, 11:30 AM
5-2 Good battle

-lock