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$killZ
07-11-2007, 02:56 AM
Travesty Yu Like A Fuckin Pig N The Dirt,
Fake As Fuck, Only Guns Yu Ever Held Were The Ones That Squirt //

An Only Time Yu Thuggin Is In Texts On The Internet,
Yu Gangsta? Put Fear Into Yu With Just One Session Of Russian Roulette //

Only Time Ya Rhymes Were Hot Was In The Sun,
An Only Time You Were Ever Gangsta Is When Yu Held Ya Squirt Gun //

Yu Fuckin Pussy Why The Fuck Did Yu Go An Diss Me?
Bitch, Only Shots Yu Took Were With A Needle Yu Aint No T-H-U-G //

I Thought Yur Rhymes Were Aiight Then Yu Felloff An Thought Yu Could Take Shots?
Yu A Sucker For Love, Bitches Got Yur Stomach In Knots //

Yu Sound Like A Faggot On Mic, Almost Reincarnated Vinilla Ice,
Yu Tried Once, Now Yu Back Tryna Make It Twice //

Yu Clearly Dont Understand Who Yur Fuckin Wit,
Keep Talkin N Yu'll Get That Throat Of Yurs Slit //

I Shot N Killed Yu Already Closed The Casket,
Might As Well Put Another Nail In Tha Coffine N Put R.I.P. On Ya Mothers Note W/ Flowers In A Basket //

Before Yu Get A Grip Of Ya Self Like Grip Tires,
Cause Yu Gonna Need To Breath When I Start Exposin Yu Liers //

Doctors Cant Save Yu So Best Get A Body Bag,
Tell Rapdogs I Said Rest In Peace N I Shot Him Wit Tha Mag //

If Yu Had A Problem Wit Me Why Aint Yu Say So?
Instead Of Bein A Bitch N Dissin Me Like A Ho //

I Played Yu Like A Game Cuz Ya Rhymes Seemed Older Than A Nintendo 64,
Played Yu N All Yu Did For Me Was Bore //

Yu Live In Ports Mouth Wait Till I Transport Ya Mouth,
Havin Yu Studderin Wit Ya Words Like Rappers Down South //

Only Time Yu Masterbated Was Usin Porno Games On The Internet,
I'd Tell Yu Put Forth A Dolla To But Yu Probably Too Broke To Bet //

Only Thing Yu Ever Tapped Was Chunky Like Campbells Soup,
An Only Thing Yu Ever Let Drop Was A Mess Like Dog Poop //

I'ma Pour Out A Lil Liqour For Yu, Cuz Yu Were A Rap Dog,
But Yu Got Bent Over, Raped, N Fucked On A Log //

I'll Have Yu Rappin Outta Air Like Needin Breath Support,
Yu Probably A Lil Internet Kid Thas Like 12 Tryna Be Gangsta In Port //

I Fucked Yur Diss Worser Than Inmates In Prision Who Got Caught In Action For Droppin The Soap,
I Lyrically Smoked Yu So Aint No Way Yu Could Be Dope!! //




"Yeah Yu Fuckin' Punk Pussy.. Fuckin Faggot.
Fuckin Queer As Homo Thug..
Fuck Yu, Yu Lil Bitch..
Next Time Yu Got A Fuckin Problem Wit Me..
Fuckin Call Me Out..
Fuckin Message Me N We'll Battle..
I Ain't For That Pussy Ass Dissin Shit..
Yu Lil Bitchh..
Next Time Come Harder If Yur Gonna Fuckin Diss Me.."

makewayforenkay
07-11-2007, 07:09 PM
u used a played punch TWICE in one drop, with more elementary rhymes and just nothing that really hits,

$killZ
07-11-2007, 07:22 PM
Lets See Yu Do Better.
Stop Hatin N Give Postive Shit Yu Dick.

makewayforenkay
07-11-2007, 07:27 PM
like i said for ur other piece, it's hard to feed positive when theres nothing positive about a piece. u can hate all you want and call me a dick boy or w/e the fuck u want. i was given u CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM learn how to be a man and learn from ur mistakes instead of crying when those mistakes r pointed out to u.

$killZ
07-11-2007, 07:28 PM
Well Fuckin How Hard Does A Dude Gotta Try.
Like Fuckin'..

johnny 5
07-11-2007, 09:18 PM
Hard, you should prolly stop rhymin coz by the way you talkin
it sounds like you just don't have what it takes for this. Pick
up a book or something.

$killZ
07-11-2007, 10:00 PM
Nahh Fuck That.
I Been Rappin For 5 Years Now.
I'ma Keep My Dream Alive No Matter What Yu Doubters Say.

TruridahX
07-12-2007, 01:18 AM
rapping for 5 years?? holy shit, im 14 and been rapping for like 2 months and ill take you eaaasy

anytime you want to battle me, say word..

$-2Fresh-Mobb-$
07-12-2007, 07:43 AM
Why do yall gang up on him if its whack why did really care to
post

makewayforenkay
07-12-2007, 12:34 PM
idk y these guys did. he told me to feed it. and i gave him the truth.

johnny 5
07-12-2007, 01:23 PM
Nahh Fuck That.
I Been Rappin For 5 Years Now.
I'ma Keep My Dream Alive No Matter What Yu Doubters Say.

I never doubted you. You doubt yourself hence why you should stop.

$killZ
07-12-2007, 04:23 PM
Nahh.
Ima Do What I Do