Havioc Vs Mello

[Da Havioc]

yea how about 2.30 min. maximum and with a hook or suttin like that, if you want one iight check check

[mello2]

aight when is the deadline

[Da Havioc]

next week thurs

[mello2]

damn that long, im like finished wit mine, just gotta record

[Da Havioc]

oo i thought u would of been lond my b iight tuesday

[mello2]

word, ill prolly post mine up by tomorrow night....i have football til like 7ish


voting:

flow
delivery
punchlines
similes/metaphors
head bobbing effect
hook
instrumentals
wordplay
personals

no hate...straight up vote

[mello2]

yo what up....im busy so i can only record 1 minute and 30 seconds or shit cuz i got a essay and football all day tomorrow til seven so im done wit the track but its again, only a minute thrity but im satisfied wit it, it actually came out to like 2 min. and 15 seconds but i rapped til like 1 min. 35 sec. or suttin like that, im postin it soon

[mello2]

http://www.soundclick.com/pro/view/01/default.cfm?bandid=700230&songid=5875836&content=song

yo, this is my drop......check it man]

its not that bad for my first battle, the lyrics are allright i think, i couldnt get much off yea so personals were hard idk

lets have a good battle

lyrics

Verse:
this aint no game, you dont got three lives
i treat yea like king cuz all of your dreams died
your just a french fry, im a cook yea deep fried
quit frontin mean guy, punchin me with weak rhymes
causin damage, im playing havoc with this cats life
fuck your mixtape, noones buyin that for a whack price
thats right, havoc is half white, half bitch
your shit is embarrassing like fuckin fat chicks
when your drunk, this tight cunt is about to get ripped
shit ya know you suck when hated on by deaf kids
this kids is havoc, causing damage to my eardrums
learn how to rap cuz ya didnt hit snare once
messing wit mello, end up dead like your avatar
havoc will cease, blood shed like im hamilcar
not even contested, my skill is more impressive
this faggots wasting space, why the games congested
repping the three o five, the mean streets of miami
produced rick ross who will never win a grammy
and the only decent rapper is convinced hes a pitbull
a lot of queers down south so it gives you a dickfull
havocs a disgrace, this battle is a joke
cuz he cant spit even when he sucks off chodes
so put down the mic and stick to selling them keyes
this pussys likes pastries when im near cuz he cremes

Hook:
da havoc
is a have not
blood drops
no luck when the mac pops
i rip this bitch
like a virgin
the show is over
close the curtains

[Da Havioc]

iight am tryin to keep myself from to much work so i can be able to drop tonight iight

[mello2]

aight

[dannyruxspin]

lets have a good battle




Why lie about it?

[mello2]

its my first battle, just bein a good sport

[mello2]

come on.....when you have a chance man, i understand lifes more important, so try to get it down tonight or tomorrow.....i want this audio forum up and running and more exciting....its so dead

[mello2]

you almost done??

[Da Havioc]

yea i been done but sound click trippin it load up but dont play nothin no sound

[mello2]

soo umm idk, did u try uploadin today??

[[Seven]]

Mello Yo Won ... This Hoe No-Showed...

D.Q'd I Reckon...

[mello2]

oh snap...i forgot all about this...lol