Baby_Tasha V JuJu - Topical Battle

[9milli]

The Topic

the topic is you are a father and have just found out that your son has been murdered over some money that he owed. You will both take the rhyme to tell about the feeling of it and what your actions as the father will be.

anything else u wanna know just holla


The Rules

30 Bars Max
No hate votes
No dickridin
All votes must be explained and use voting format or will not be accepted


The Voting Categories
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Wordplay:
Consistency:
Creativity:
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Overall:

Both of y'all need to check in and then BT drops first


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[Divine Write]

Checking in

[...yOuNg jU...]

check...

[...yOuNg jU...]

yo we gunna do this or what???

[Divine Write]

I'll post don't worry.....I don't see a time limit so I have til I'm ready.....i work and do other things and I havn't gotten around to writing it yet....I'll have it no later than this saturday....if I don't than count me as a no show

[...yOuNg jU...]

lol.. iight dagz

[9milli]

juju no-show from divine, sorry divine i know you don't have a lot of spare time like myself but if it hasn't happened now it prob never will

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[Baby_Tasha]

yo 9milli ill take dis.... who am i up against

[9milli]

aight girl u up against juju if hes still down to get it crackin

JUJU check on this dog n u can drop sumthin

ONE

[...yOuNg jU...]

ohh aiight.. im down for it...

[Baby_Tasha]

check.... juju drop first....

[...yOuNg jU...]

iight ma... good luck

[...yOuNg jU...]

It All Repeats Itself


yo, i was workin, n drillin a screw on the wall...
heard theres been a killin, some local crew round the mall...
my feeling? none really, round here, young ones always fall...
my celly was off, 2 hours passed n i hadn't recieved the call...
im off, 8 hours work, at 6 dollaz an hour...
thaz $48 a day n not enough to keep my apartment wit power...
or water in the shower, but thaz my fault i admit it...
for havin a corrupt home n seein mah mom give pussy like kittens...
then use our government money on diesel, n i aint talkin the brand...
i was the oldest so i took charge, but felt like i was walkin a plank...
thaz what u do to survive, i had to drop out n kill...
thaz what i went through, n promised my son neva will...
but the gutta got him, it aint enough to survive, now u gotta floss...
i neva did, even afta toothbrushing, now u gotta have an iced out cross...
the industry corrupts the standards, n to b accepted he started pitchin...
wishin he cud b like them, he tried to tell me but i refused to lissen...
so im hearin my messages n all i hear is mah baby moms bitching...
whats this about? theres too many sirens and i cant make out her words...
so i call her to find out somethin that changed my world...
my baby boy is dead, murdered around the mall by some local thugs...
all i saw was black and no words came out like mahh vocals was fucked...
ignited the hydro n grabbed the hammers but not carpentring utensils...
hopped in the whip, ready to fill these punks wit lead like mechanical pencils...
now it all repeats itself...

YoUnG Ju...

[Baby_Tasha]

Yooo wuss good..listen juju..ill drop in a day or two im having family problems and i aint gone be round a cpu...so NO1 else take on this battle i want it...but ill drop wen shit settles...tite verse

peace

[...yOuNg jU...]

iight ma no problem take ya time.. i understand how that goes... stay up n hold ya head



Ju...

[Baby_Tasha]

(sorry dis took so long, thanks pa for ya understanding)

*ring ring* I picked up in an instant of joy
Cuz emith smith just scored goal, he's my boy
Listening to the voice repeat again //
"Ya sons life been brought to an end// with 3 bullets to his head//"

Hypnotic, simply unbelievable
Screwed up and twisted, minds un-re-treavable
Dropped the phone, took 2 steps back
Ran out the home, been clipped, soals been attacked
Something toxic been pumped through my viens
Head hearts, hearts weak with this pain
Dazed n Confused, Stumblin to breath,
Look at the sky and recite "god why me?"

From the moment i layed eyes on him, Knew he was my everything
From the first day I cryed for him, Knew he was my everything
From the day i won costedy, tried for him, new he was my everything

My fault this tradegy been preformed
Sneak back in my car, life of the thugz, gone be deformed
Twisted and ripped, i got this, Bout to feel bliss
One thing they wont miss......
Iz the gat and its clip

BLACK OUT------ Itz over, lifes been takin,
Unreal as if I'm fakin, Just took controll ...here comes an end to this situation~

[Baby_Tasha]

(sorry dis took so long, thanks pa for ya understanding)

*ring ring* I picked up in an instant of joy
Cuz emith smith just scored goal, he's my boy
Listening to the voice repeat again //
"Ya sons life been brought to an end// with 3 bullets to his head//"

Hypnotic, simply unbelievable
Screwed up and twisted, minds un-re-treavable
Dropped the phone, took 2 steps back
Ran out the home, been clipped, soals been attacked
Something toxic been pumped through my viens
Head hearts, hearts weak with this pain
Dazed n Confused, Stumblin to breath,
Look at the sky and recite "god why me?"

From the moment i layed eyes on him, Knew he was my everything
From the first day I cryed for him, Knew he was my everything
From the day i won costedy, tried for him, new he was my everything

My fault this tradegy been preformed
Sneak back in my car, life of the thugz, gone be deformed
Twisted and ripped, i got this, Bout to feel bliss
One thing they wont miss......
Iz the gat and its clip

BLACK OUT------ Itz over, lifes been takin,
Unreal as if I'm fakin, Just took controll ...here comes an end to this situation~

[Baby_Tasha]

i posted ... iunno wuts goin on wit my rapdogs..... ill try posting again ..but it aint showen nuthen

[...yOuNg jU...]

iight iight... good verse ma.. now let the voting begin

[...yOuNg jU...]

uppin fa votes...

[Baby_Tasha]

upin fa votes please....

[P]

YO THIS P. I WANT A FUCKIN FEMALE PARTNER IN CRIME. WHAT CHICK IS WORTHY :evil:

[...yOuNg jU...]

yo i moved this to the vet forum to get sum votes...

[tommyvercetti200]

baby tasha deserv dis vote.baby got flow ,punches everything

vote=baby tasha

[trixx]

YO BABY TAHA WAS SICK AS HELL GOOD SHIT MA

[Deafening Silence]

(this topic looks dusty, i hope no one objects to me putting a little something down on it...)


my only 30 old son,
bad run,
feelin in my gut...

he liked to run the streets an such,
but today he's gone way to much,
i know he liked to smoke the dutch,
feels like somebody popped the clutch,
my heart dropped heavy straight down to the floor,
when i hheard the rappin' rappin' right on the door,
them folks in my window and i know it aint good,
another murder happened - happened in my neighborhood,
can i identify a body is what they wanna know,
they warn me pretty early that there ain't much to show,
i try to stay calm - i already know,
i think this is the very last blow,
i can't take the sight as the sheet pulls back slow,
mess in bowls and tags, my son is no mo,
nothing recognizable but a leg tattooed "Got Flow?",
that night on the evening news - a brand new show,
i got my gat cocked back, judgement day on the low,
here we go...

ripn - tripn - get back - full on the name, grip hat - ill knack - fix lack - caught you in my game, time nil - cup fill - wine swill away, i got the cup of the anger of His wrath and thats all i'm gonna say, tip that back - cat - like so many beers,
chained up - reigned up - face the judgement of your peers, i got the whole net on lock - now come face your fears...


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[Baby_Tasha]

aw shiiit would ya look't that?? ya dug up this ol thing... ill add on ina few .... nice shit^^

[Deafening Silence]

cool, your work's off the rip too, no doubt...

[Stix]

Hot shiz ya'll, I'm gonna get that dirt off this post... lol just playin here we go...

Loaded heat, to be exact I packed a glock
Pissed off, wearing a tan top with flip flops
Running down the street hoping I don’t get caught
I hate my boy was ever even involved in hip hop
I love my son and my daughter I won’t neglect him or her
When I got the call I said damn another bill collector
So not picking up the phone, I rolled to Stop and Go
Bought a 6 pack of Micelob, then rolled some indo,
Turned on the car radio and turned the speakers down
For a split second I lost all of my sense of sound
“Two local youths have been shot execution style”
“The first is named Keith and the other is Kyle”
I think, to myself that’s my sons name oh shit…
“Kyle is the son of local rapper named Stix”
Pulling my act together, and not shedding a tear
I picked up my drink and poured out a little beer
Packed my artillery and prepared for war
I’ll find out who killed my son and settle the score.

[Deafening Silence]

nice^^